loved so far , only the paragraphs are really disturbing that's all. thanks for showing us another side of the same world in stories

hello if you are a female writer then let me you sister and you are male then bro. just keep the paragraph short will ya. it's way to long. but everything else is fine

sorry for Disappointing grammar but I just resently started using chat gpt after 27 chapters . and you are right I just started learning English a year ago. and i think I am doing pretty good so far. as for system and Ethans , they just made fun of each other maybe i was unable to bring out their funny moments as of yet. but in the future i will try to improve it. as for predictable storyline it was just a introduction volume. from 2nd volume the real deal will start from college to depth of the forest, with unique monsters to legendary creatures . and ofcourse scum of the society. but thanks for the review anyway

sorry, I know my grammar is horrible, and in the starting chapters I didn't use AI for correction. but don't worry as I get the chance I will improve it. just don't give up on this book .

sorry, I must have made a mistake while typing . and thank you for reading my book

then i think can give it a trying thanks for the spoiler

it's a nice book and the start is also perfect but you put the story in our planet Earth which I don't like reading about. sorry it not your fault but I just don't like this . it's enough for me to live my life in reality but novel I love to explore another place different world with there uniqueness about it. your book is good but unfortunately I can't read it

different dragons have same power why?

hello friend for now don't worry about the review just focus on grinding . the more chapters you have the more people will view this book. i like the story btw. upload soon.

one question will this novel go into space aswell. or you will going to finish the story like that other novel. where he just built a spaceship and the story finished .if it's like that then I don't want to read this book.

I like how you put work into the chapters , pls don't stop your story like the others.

no, it's actually thanks to you. I am following your advice

for now yes, but later it's going to be more complicated than a system

I was going to increase it many fold but someone advised me against it . because in the later chapters it's going to be difficult that's i set it at only double

looks promising I am looking forward to more chapters

don't worry I just started using AI for correction so it wouldn't happen again. and i hadn't had the time to correct the previous chapters . sorry

don't worry now I am going to use AI for any correction before updating any chapiters

don't worry, it would be last i am not so good at it.

sorry didn't understand

alright it will be done