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Pumpkin_King10
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2024-01-30 11:56

I admit I have a soft spot for any type of novel that has something to do with technology and this one is good it really shows how the main character is changing before your eyes from a normal student to a smart and independent man who is willing to earn his money his way without a system giving him all the support and it goes at a steady pace not to slow or to quickly making you really want to read more and not get lost not understanding what's being written 😉 thx author for the good novel and please continue 👍

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GspoT1
GspoT1Lv14

support pre! dito tayo sa mga pinoy haha

Twilight_of_god
Twilight_of_godLv13

name other novels like this

Bradley_Killick
Bradley_KillickLv14

Recommend any novels like this based on business and technology with some sort of system?

One_sword
One_swordLv14

Although I have not read this novel based on your conversation I can recommend… scholars advanced technological system Losing money to be a tycoon. I have a USB flash drive (this one is my personal fav) There are more but I think this is enough…

Bradley_Killick:Recommend any novels like this based on business and technology with some sort of system?
Bradley_Killick
Bradley_KillickLv14

Okay thanks I’ll check em out, want to make sure there isn’t any yuri, yaoi, NTR(like mc loses his women or they cheat on mc)

One_sword:Although I have not read this novel based on your conversation I can recommend… scholars advanced technological system Losing money to be a tycoon. I have a USB flash drive (this one is my personal fav) There are more but I think this is enough…
LightYagami2000
LightYagami2000Lv13

Is this harem? Hope not

S_E_N_J_U
S_E_N_J_ULv14

I have read all these. Can you suggest anything similar to these?

One_sword:Although I have not read this novel based on your conversation I can recommend… scholars advanced technological system Losing money to be a tycoon. I have a USB flash drive (this one is my personal fav) There are more but I think this is enough…
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Read getting a technology system in modern day

Bradley_Killick:Recommend any novels like this based on business and technology with some sort of system?
Bradley_Killick
Bradley_KillickLv14

Yup read that one, pretty good.

Romance_guy:Read getting a technology system in modern day
Detective_Blck
Detective_BlckLv13

tama parekoy

GspoT1:support pre! dito tayo sa mga pinoy haha
Oweike_Ebijuoworih
Oweike_EbijuoworihLv3

yeah

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Horizon
HorizonLv13

Read up to ch 78 and this will be a blunt review. This story is obviously inspired by the “Scholar’s Advanced Technological System.” However the difference in quality and understanding of why that story succeeds is not the same. A major issue in this tech type stories is that the author can easily be bogged down writing jargon or a lot of inessential details that do not move the story forward and just make you scroll through the chapter because as a reader you know it’s not important. This is a failure in any book in my opinion. Readers should not feel that they are reading filler and that their time is wasted reading. However, I felt that way so many times reading this story. There were chapters where more than half of it was wasted on a list of inconsequential information that would not even matter one chapter over. The reason SATS succeeded is because the author understood how to temper the info dumps, in that story they are reserved only for techno jargon where there is some competition or tension in the story, making you be invested in the jargon, even if all of it did not make sense to a normal person. Here is just wasted on the specs of a truck, properties, or employee listings. Now onto the story aspects. The system and its inception is super cookie cutter, some generic Goddess™️ finds pity on this generic dude is “struggling oh so much” with the most generic issues. Honestly, the background of the main character would not be that important if it wasn’t so bland. Now the story progress is suffering from the same issue of the info dumps, bogged down by inconsequential content. Oh he has to file for business permits, oh he has to spend four chapters buying a truck to stroke his bruised ego because some guy looked at him funny, oh he has to spend multiple chapters getting a drivers license. It’s all just so banal and honestly not interesting to read. Which is the worst thing a book can do, bore you. Which is funny considering the most interesting part of this novel are the two female side characters who are investors in his business. They are interesting. I feel like the story would be so much better if a lot of the “filler” is cut down and the author focuses on moving the story forward instead of meandering on the most mundane aspects of the story.

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