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2023-05-05 19:18

Others may like it, but not for me. He is the son of Minato, and get his template. Rather than being a genius, he got 1000x worst, in exchange for getting 100x the original strength of the technique he wanted to learn. He hides his strength to not let the higher ups suspicious about him. But they know that he is training all the time, isn't that suspicious as a son of one of the most genius ninja in konoha's history? Yeah he hide it even though for me he doesn't need to because it's not unexpected, especially he is the son of Minato and not a jinjuriki. Not my cup of tea. ..

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RuberDF
RuberDFLv5

This sounds pretty damning, will wait for more reviews and see what others think about the story before give it a try

Eid_zack
Eid_zackLv4

well,so what if he training ,all of the clans kid will train,but not all will be a prodigy

Isak_Svartrapmo
Isak_SvartrapmoLv4

and it looks like this will be going the harem route with ino and haku (female) for now

hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

haku is a guy, any author who make him a girl have the most superficial cannon knowledge. They are just retconing when it get pointed out.

Isak_Svartrapmo:and it looks like this will be going the harem route with ino and haku (female) for now
Isak_Svartrapmo
Isak_SvartrapmoLv4

it's a fanfic what does it matter whether or not they make haku male, it's not important

hero4hire:haku is a guy, any author who make him a girl have the most superficial cannon knowledge. They are just retconing when it get pointed out.
Sky_Demon_Order
Sky_Demon_OrderLv14

Exactly

hero4hire:haku is a guy, any author who make him a girl have the most superficial cannon knowledge. They are just retconing when it get pointed out.
Sky_Demon_Order
Sky_Demon_OrderLv14

It important

Isak_Svartrapmo:it's a fanfic what does it matter whether or not they make haku male, it's not important
Isak_Svartrapmo
Isak_SvartrapmoLv4

No its not! it would only matter if this was supposed to be cannon, but since its au and a fanfic it doesn't matter

Sky_Demon_Order:It important
Lord_Shiva_
Lord_Shiva_Lv14

💀 the whole point of a fanfic is to change things from canon. Go watch the anime if u don’t want anything to change.

hero4hire:haku is a guy, any author who make him a girl have the most superficial cannon knowledge. They are just retconing when it get pointed out.
pussydestroyer_
pussydestroyer_Lv4

I agree tho authors, in general, still follow the canon, either lazy or lack the creativity. Sometimes, they put mc in place of canon mc then make it harem, which is kinda repetitive I mean what's new I've been reading this plot since a decade ago

Lord_Shiva_:💀 the whole point of a fanfic is to change things from canon. Go watch the anime if u don’t want anything to change.
Daoist979020
Daoist979020Lv1

Betul sekali

pussydestroyer_:I agree tho authors, in general, still follow the canon, either lazy or lack the creativity. Sometimes, they put mc in place of canon mc then make it harem, which is kinda repetitive I mean what's new I've been reading this plot since a decade ago
Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

ive been wondering why stories like this with bunch of negative comments come on being one of the top in power ranking. lol

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I'll give you an example, McDonald's, they have food with questionable ingredients and additives but people keep buying hamburgers that will still be edible for 300 years (I made that up, I don't know how much "shelf life" a McDonald's hamburger has, but it is a long time)

Unpaid_FoxGod:ive been wondering why stories like this with bunch of negative comments come on being one of the top in power ranking. lol
killersoul
killersoulLv13

these books on the rankings generally have a lot of traffic some like it some don't usually normal people are more inclined to complain when they are unhappy with something than they are to praise when they are happy with it not to mention some people just find it eh and don't care enough either way so they don't review either which causes these situations that said I've long learned the rankings mean almost nothing as far as quality goes so i just occasionally scroll through the entire ranking list to see if there is anything that catches my interests if so add it to a reading list if it has less than 20 chapters (because a lot of works get dropped before that point so i no longer look at them until they have enough chapters) and if it has at least 20 I'll throw it into my library and read it when I'm done scrolling through the rest of the list

Unpaid_FoxGod:ive been wondering why stories like this with bunch of negative comments come on being one of the top in power ranking. lol
Nightmare_deity
Nightmare_deityLv4

machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Is the harem confirmed?

ManaZoneOfDao
ManaZoneOfDaoLv14

I liked this fanfic at first but then it started common troupe mc has system he gets overpowered when he doesn't need and gets nerfed exactly when the whole war arc starts why to be powerful in Farmlands when you are gonna get weak during war though the writing, mc each and everything is best so far.

Niloy_Das
Niloy_DasLv4

Genderbending is different then other story changes. Because for people like me it's simply sickening 🤮🤮. Breaks the immersion completely. Also, most people don't just complain without reason. Usually it's because one of the few reasons: 1) Genderbending 2) Completely changing the power system (Like turning Naruto / One Piece powers into Chinese Cultivation somehow 🙄🙄) 3) Nerfing MC powers with very bad reasoning, when the real reason is that the author simply doesn't know how to continue writing after the MC becomes OP. 4) Nerfing the other Original characters (Power / Intelligence) with no good reason. Power - Most of the time it's because author doesn't even properly understand the world they are writing about and only has some superficial knowledge. Intelligence - Most of the time because author is too dumb to write a smart MC but tries anyway. Ofcourse there are some whiny brats but most people don't mind changes in the story itself. It's only when the authors destroy the essence of the original itself that they are forced to complain. I am not including stories which ignore basic common sense every step of the way cause I don't think that's needed. 💀💀

Lord_Shiva_:💀 the whole point of a fanfic is to change things from canon. Go watch the anime if u don’t want anything to change.
Uzumaki_Kushina_21
Uzumaki_Kushina_21Lv5

MTL is better than this

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