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Alejandr0
Alejandr0Lv21yr
2023-12-07 13:40

Before you start reading this fic I warn you that the MC is OP and the label (weak to strong) is false. The title of this fic is also fake, it doesn't have anything resembling a template, it's just a system that gives him a lot of powers that Minato Namikaze has and doesn't have. The author always makes the MC fight without using all of his abilities and powers and the battles last 3 or 5 chapters. Great possibilities of HAREM and if not INO and an OC that the author created in a journey that lasted from chapter 100 to 162 that apart from obtaining "conqueror haki" and Fūinjutsu from Mito Uzumaki himself added an OC UZUMAKI as a love interest, completely eliminating to Karin Uzumaki and the trip to the past does not affect her future at all. After returning and starting Naruto Shippuden, the author weakens the MC again and in the end takes away the system and everything he obtained. In short, this starts off bad and gets worse over time. There may also be trips to other worlds or a crossing of worlds. And these are important examples, then there are more details to continue mentioning how bad this FAN-FICS is.

In Naruto With Minato Template (Complete)

kamidemond
3.8
310 Chs

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kamidemond
kamidemondAuthor

I actually agree. I back then started writing this fic for just fun and just did whatever I wanted to. Later on I realized that making MC too OP is a bad idea. I am just grateful that so many people like this fic even this fic having soo many plot holes and problems. I really wanted to solve many of the problems later but each try comes with a price not to mention, some mistake in the plot are not fixable. Still, I will be truely Grateful if you still read it. Consider its an first try of a novice author

1yr
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Alejandr0
Alejandr0Lv2

In my opinion your other fanfic (Naruto: The Untouchable) is much better than this one. I recommend that you finish this fanfic (In Naruto with Minato Template) and then take it as an example of what you don't have to do and also see the mistakes you made. Another thing is that the title and the content do not match, I personally felt cheated. The other thing is the labels and if you doubt or decide on another one, change them so that the reader knows. Your idea is interesting, but try to further develop the MC and those who are important to him, this includes romantic interests. I hope this fanfic gets rewritten in the future.

kamidemond:I actually agree. I back then started writing this fic for just fun and just did whatever I wanted to. Later on I realized that making MC too OP is a bad idea. I am just grateful that so many people like this fic even this fic having soo many plot holes and problems. I really wanted to solve many of the problems later but each try comes with a price not to mention, some mistake in the plot are not fixable. Still, I will be truely Grateful if you still read it. Consider its an first try of a novice author
1yr
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kamidemond
kamidemondAuthor

i agree with most of them, I will try to fix as much as possible

Alejandr0:In my opinion your other fanfic (Naruto: The Untouchable) is much better than this one. I recommend that you finish this fanfic (In Naruto with Minato Template) and then take it as an example of what you don't have to do and also see the mistakes you made. Another thing is that the title and the content do not match, I personally felt cheated. The other thing is the labels and if you doubt or decide on another one, change them so that the reader knows. Your idea is interesting, but try to further develop the MC and those who are important to him, this includes romantic interests. I hope this fanfic gets rewritten in the future.
1yr
1
RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

Another request PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF EVERYTHING GOOD PUT A FREAKING TAG THAT SAYS CROSSOVER.

kamidemond:I actually agree. I back then started writing this fic for just fun and just did whatever I wanted to. Later on I realized that making MC too OP is a bad idea. I am just grateful that so many people like this fic even this fic having soo many plot holes and problems. I really wanted to solve many of the problems later but each try comes with a price not to mention, some mistake in the plot are not fixable. Still, I will be truely Grateful if you still read it. Consider its an first try of a novice author
10mth
kamidemond
kamidemondAuthor

okay

10mth
Other Reviews
012345678910
012345678910Lv4

Others may like it, but not for me. He is the son of Minato, and get his template. Rather than being a genius, he got 1000x worst, in exchange for getting 100x the original strength of the technique he wanted to learn. He hides his strength to not let the higher ups suspicious about him. But they know that he is training all the time, isn't that suspicious as a son of one of the most genius ninja in konoha's history? Yeah he hide it even though for me he doesn't need to because it's not unexpected, especially he is the son of Minato and not a jinjuriki. Not my cup of tea. ..

1yr

Tsukuyomi777
Tsukuyomi777Lv4

This is just one of those thousands OP MC fanfics where the MC has everything figured out before he is even born For example Itachi Obito and Zetsu can definitely sense a 8 year old using jutsu And if finding root base was so easy then it would have been a tourist attraction at this point Not to mention he is just casually talking about using Hiraishin etc There was a reason why only Minato and Tobirama were albe to learn it not some 8 year old Zero focus on the character development the MC has zero personlity

1yr
DragonslayerKnight
DragonslayerKnightLv4

poor execution of plot. standard statutory r@pe and pedophilia grooming. low intelligence mc and author. nonsense system that slows the pacing and has multiple plot holes in just about every other chapter.

1yr
_JuneDays_oz
_JuneDays_ozLv14

Story is boring following too many tropes, mc is a pepo by grooming ino, author destroyed team 7 by adding ino to the team. Many plot holes. System is trash and without it mc would be nothing. He’s able to trick obito with little to planning, plot is not consistent, scaling is out of thrown out the window. I’m giving it a one star, because author said ino and mc are just friends and not even the next chapter ino and mc become a “couple”. Mc name is kirito no need to explain. Grammar is alright, but nothing to write about though. Character development is weird and mc is way to irrational. Language use for system is off like [100x critical hit] but mc never attacked anyone or was attacked, it some type of reward multiplier which is just way to op. Author makes mc op but nerfs him the next chapter, like 100x rasengan damage but it doesn’t even kill anyone other than mob characters. Last but not least let me reiterate mc is a pepo/groomer.

1yr
Xiphos_Gladius_03
Xiphos_Gladius_03Lv1

I like how this MC has a brain unlike other fanfics, and doesn't use others for his benefit. I hope you can keep updating the fanfic. Good luck! 🍀

1yr
Byluffy02
Byluffy02Lv12

The stencil system is already good enough, adding the most absurd 100x power there is to the story. The subject of books with 100x power has to enter a dead end at a certain point.

1yr
Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv4

If you have a brain, this fanfic is not for you. It's more or less a good wet dream of every brain dead simp. 1 star is actually too much for this rubbish

1yr
Drako0692
Drako0692Lv1

Another overpowered protagonist and not only has a system that gives him crazy powers development sucks and is quite intrusive at times , , , , , , , , , ,

1yr
Marn97
Marn97Lv4

trash MC. he thinks big, train big, small action when he got strong. only do the talking. may have 2 personality

1yr
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