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MadFoolLv1511mth
2024-03-05 17:13

The quality is decent with a few grammatical errors and typos but nothing major. The story starts out well but it soon gets disturbing, atleast for me. Mc is obsessive of the female lead and a compulsive liar with a tendency to stalk her. Author does not bother to explain or expand on the canon plot that much and mainly focuses on the romance and slice of life aspect, if you can even call it romance instead of pure deceit and manipulation. In short; premise was great but execution fell flat.

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