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Anon22Author1yr
2023-04-18 09:13

So this book has been going on for close to two months and I decided to drop a review here since the book is already in the second volume. So what's this book about? Well, like the synopsis said, a translucent screen appeared in front of everybody in the planet, asking them to make a single wish and well, stuffs happened. Due to certain circumstances, the MC made a wish which granted him the talent, *Omniscience*. Now, this is where some readers just get angry, rant, then leave bad comments and reviews. Some expect the MC to *BAM* become Omniscient just because he has the Omniscience talent. But NO! He won't become Omniscient immediately! Also, the MC is going to behave stupid to some people at the beginning chapters, so some people would decide to drop it. If you only decide to read up till chapter 12, 11 or something lower, then just know you'll never find out the reason for that. If you want to know why the MC behaves 'stupid', read up till chapter 57. If you read up till chapter 57 and you still don't like it , you can then decide to drop it. I don't want to speak about the personality of the MC because his personality is more like something that's very important to the book. As for the world building? Well, it's still in the budding stages. Would there be harem? Yes there would be. What is the actual plot and goal of the novel? I don't want to say anything, just read up till volume 2 and also know that. So people, I think I've everything I can say about this book. Any questions you have, just leave a comment and ask. Have a great day.

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NovaEreLv4

Screams incompetence

Anon22Author

After checking out your activity page, I'm happy I decided not to reply your words. People like you truly stress me out at times

NovaEre:Screams incompetence
NovaEreLv4

What ? ” people like me stresses you out ?” You the one that started not wanting to talk about the most important thing in the story ‘ his personality ‘ making him act like a child then will probably give a stupid reason to act like this. i don’t care if he is not omniscient at the start the problem is that this so-called gift has no effect whatsoever on his personality till later chaps as your said yourself

Anon22:After checking out your activity page, I'm happy I decided not to reply your words. People like you truly stress me out at times
Anon22Author

Did you read up to chapter 57?

NovaEre:What ? ” people like me stresses you out ?” You the one that started not wanting to talk about the most important thing in the story ‘ his personality ‘ making him act like a child then will probably give a stupid reason to act like this. i don’t care if he is not omniscient at the start the problem is that this so-called gift has no effect whatsoever on his personality till later chaps as your said yourself
trippydreameaterLv14

bruh chapter 57 is too far in the decide you like it or not. most of the time i just read 15 chapter to decide.

Anon22:Did you read up to chapter 57?
trippydreameaterLv14

cause to me that mean it's too slow for the plot to progress

Anon22Author

The thing is that everything that happened in volume 1 is actually important to the book. The only thing I would say that is actually slow about the book is the speed of the MC tiering up. As for why it took 57 chapters to explain why the MC behaved the way he did, it's cause that was the appropriate time to explain it. The plot for volume 1 is not necessarily slow like that but just know that a lot of things that happened in volume 1 were Important Just give it a try and you might like it.

trippydreameater:cause to me that mean it's too slow for the plot to progress
DemonzorLv14

I never understood giving the mc a really good power the making him dumb or something

Anon22Author

The reason he behaved dumb was explained in chapter 57 (Just like I said in the review.)

Demonzor:I never understood giving the mc a really good power the making him dumb or something
DemonzorLv14

I wasnt just talking bout your story I was just saying in general I don’t understand why give crazy powers to the mc but make them dumb and stuff like that

Anon22:The reason he behaved dumb was explained in chapter 57 (Just like I said in the review.)
DemonzorLv14

I mean most people dont wanna read bout a dumb mc when they could literally go on sum like TikTok and Reddit and hear about a ton of dumb p eople

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Chibaku_MonsterLv12

well it's by the grace of luck that I don't use those apps very often

Demonzor:I mean most people dont wanna read bout a dumb mc when they could literally go on sum like TikTok and Reddit and hear about a ton of dumb p eople
Bobyslurp23Lv15

He may have omniscience, BUT he’s still human. He may have the power to draw on all knowledge and wisdom, but he can’t do that for everything all at once or all the time. His physical biology and the limits of his brain dimly wouldn’t be able to handle that. Which means that until he gets the body of a superhuman he won’t be able to use that power a full capacity or for very long in one go.

Anon22Author

Thanks for this.

Bobyslurp23:He may have omniscience, BUT he’s still human. He may have the power to draw on all knowledge and wisdom, but he can’t do that for everything all at once or all the time. His physical biology and the limits of his brain dimly wouldn’t be able to handle that. Which means that until he gets the body of a superhuman he won’t be able to use that power a full capacity or for very long in one go.
TsetthLv14

It's best if you don't respond to comments like these in the future, usually once a reader's mind is made up, it's hard to change their view of something. It's like hitting a brick wall with an egg, just give an explanation and engage with the ones who read ahead. I learn that the hard way...

Anon22:Thanks for this.
InsertaGoodNameLv12

Why would you make a story with such good potential a harem😭😭

Anon22Author

I had to... For me, if I'm writing a story where the MC can live for thousands of years, then I'll put a harem cause for me, living for a thousand years... with only one girl? It would get boring man (That's what I feel and think). But if I'm writing a story that the MC only lives for like 100, 200 years... Then I'll make sure it's not a harem cause the time would not be too long. Anyway, I'm not going to focus too much on the harem and I'm definitely not going to forget them like how some other authors do. I already know what I want from the harem and I think some current readers and future readers would like it.

InsertaGoodName:Why would you make a story with such good potential a harem😭😭
ZhourongHephaestusLv14

yep tictok is the utopia of dumb sters

Demonzor:I mean most people dont wanna read bout a dumb mc when they could literally go on sum like TikTok and Reddit and hear about a ton of dumb p eople
BlyssEpicLv2

Aprende a escribirlo apropiadamente, y luego puedes decir eso

ZhourongHephaestus:yep tictok is the utopia of dumb sters
ZhourongHephaestusLv14

sorry, I don't understand the language, mate.

BlyssEpic:Aprende a escribirlo apropiadamente, y luego puedes decir eso
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