Demonzor

Yes a rewrite

Yeah to me it’s one of the few things I dislike about the story how the author made vander character in it.

First of I haven’t said anything negative about the story just that the last couple chapters haven’t been as interesting as the rest of the story. Second don’t act like you’ve never read a story and felt like certain parts are really boring. Third why are you saying all this like I went and wrote a review giving a low rating when all I did was write a comment about how boring the chapter was not the whole story

I don’t think anybody needed a random like you to speak up

Not gon lie at this point the story starting to get boring

Not really much to say it’s your normal talentless mc with a overpowered cheat. It’s crazy that the mc is a uchiha but he’s so talentless that he can’t even learn one of the most basic jutsu. It’s a basic Mtl story with sum okay grammar everybody but the mc feels like they got dumbed down to make a dumb person sound smart.

It’s your average dc system story. Not really much to say the writing quality is decent. The story tho is just like every other dc or marvel fic with the mc ending up joining Batman them. The mc is nothing special either nothing about him will really make you want to read it.

I thought every human in marvel has the x gene

Not gon lie felt like this arc should have ended way quicker too much filler

It a okay story just douluo retold while bashing the mc of the douluo story there isn’t anything new or special about it but it can be a good read if there’s nothing else to read