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2023-06-17 06:56

very uninteresting very misleading very click baiting. Again another author who doesnot understand people click on your novel due to the title and synopsis. Sucessful bait but poor execution of story. No reader will wait for 57 chapter for something interesting to happen.For example you go into a restaurant and order food and for the first 15 min they serve you bland stuff , will you wait for them to keep bringing stuff and hoping to see the food get better?? No, you will just leave there and look for a better one.

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So this book has been going on for close to two months and I decided to drop a review here since the book is already in the second volume. So what's this book about? Well, like the synopsis said, a translucent screen appeared in front of everybody in the planet, asking them to make a single wish and well, stuffs happened. Due to certain circumstances, the MC made a wish which granted him the talent, *Omniscience*. Now, this is where some readers just get angry, rant, then leave bad comments and reviews. Some expect the MC to *BAM* become Omniscient just because he has the Omniscience talent. But NO! He won't become Omniscient immediately! Also, the MC is going to behave stupid to some people at the beginning chapters, so some people would decide to drop it. If you only decide to read up till chapter 12, 11 or something lower, then just know you'll never find out the reason for that. If you want to know why the MC behaves 'stupid', read up till chapter 57. If you read up till chapter 57 and you still don't like it , you can then decide to drop it. I don't want to speak about the personality of the MC because his personality is more like something that's very important to the book. As for the world building? Well, it's still in the budding stages. Would there be harem? Yes there would be. What is the actual plot and goal of the novel? I don't want to say anything, just read up till volume 2 and also know that. So people, I think I've everything I can say about this book. Any questions you have, just leave a comment and ask. Have a great day.

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