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SkelatronLv151yr
2023-06-03 10:53

everyone gets a wish. its pushed to start with as very overpowered and very open ended. no wish twisting, just a simple what do you want. what the synopsis doesnt tell you is at integration there is a balance that caps everyone at level 1 of the power ceiling. so if you wished. i want to be a god, you then get nerfed to level 1 brand with powers of a slightly stronger human. i feel baited. writing quality is not great. characters are 1 dimentional and seem to be focused on bad anime character tropes. there's no world building. author seems to be projecting his/her own emotions into their characters. i hope they gets some help if so. i dont recommend but try if you like

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Spen8torLv15

You're actually understating it because in your example, the person with a level one power is slightly above average in their gifts specific area while the MC in this book has his intelligence set to be significantly bellow average after getting omniscience and it takes a lot of time and effort just for him to reach the average intelligence of a normal human without any powers...

MoffinssLv2

honestly I really want to understand something if what you want is that every single is granted as asked then what is the point of the novel, cause someone could easily have wished for every being in there universe to die and boom the same novel is over, or like stated in the novel someone wishes for the destruction of the world, what type of novel will you want when the mc dies even before the novel beginnings, thats exactly why every wish had to be reduced to give everyone a chance, my opinion tho just imagine 50 people wished to be the strongest person in the world which one out of the 50 will be the strongest because if one of them is stronger than the other then the wish was not performed and they can't be at the same level cause that also means there wish was not granted

SkelatronLv15

Its not the contents on the book that I dont like,tho that does play a part for sure. it's the Baiting of the synopsis. also Kindof expected. but there are probably hundreds of stories where the MC starts off with some bullshit OP abilities and you just roll from there. with all the context that every described element of reviews and the authors described book it felt very disingenuous to find out 5 mins into the book that in fact no the MC doesn't get cool abilities but he in fact starts with less that what was promised, with how this app works spending coins, or spirit stones on the story wasnt going to be worth it to me when there are much better things to read on this app. there where some other elements I didnt like as well. the characters were bland and hard to read, the power of the wish and rules you have to abide by when making the wish should have been stated so it's understood quickly and effectively. for example rule 1 you can ask to be the strongest in the world, but the power isn't granted to you. it just unlocked your bodies potential and gives you talent or attributes you wouldn't have otherwise. this works if you want to have a book with a weak to strong approach. instead they let you wish for whatever you wanted and then after that nerfed you if the wish was too broad or too powerful

Moffinss:honestly I really want to understand something if what you want is that every single is granted as asked then what is the point of the novel, cause someone could easily have wished for every being in there universe to die and boom the same novel is over, or like stated in the novel someone wishes for the destruction of the world, what type of novel will you want when the mc dies even before the novel beginnings, thats exactly why every wish had to be reduced to give everyone a chance, my opinion tho just imagine 50 people wished to be the strongest person in the world which one out of the 50 will be the strongest because if one of them is stronger than the other then the wish was not performed and they can't be at the same level cause that also means there wish was not granted
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So this book has been going on for close to two months and I decided to drop a review here since the book is already in the second volume. So what's this book about? Well, like the synopsis said, a translucent screen appeared in front of everybody in the planet, asking them to make a single wish and well, stuffs happened. Due to certain circumstances, the MC made a wish which granted him the talent, *Omniscience*. Now, this is where some readers just get angry, rant, then leave bad comments and reviews. Some expect the MC to *BAM* become Omniscient just because he has the Omniscience talent. But NO! He won't become Omniscient immediately! Also, the MC is going to behave stupid to some people at the beginning chapters, so some people would decide to drop it. If you only decide to read up till chapter 12, 11 or something lower, then just know you'll never find out the reason for that. If you want to know why the MC behaves 'stupid', read up till chapter 57. If you read up till chapter 57 and you still don't like it , you can then decide to drop it. I don't want to speak about the personality of the MC because his personality is more like something that's very important to the book. As for the world building? Well, it's still in the budding stages. Would there be harem? Yes there would be. What is the actual plot and goal of the novel? I don't want to say anything, just read up till volume 2 and also know that. So people, I think I've everything I can say about this book. Any questions you have, just leave a comment and ask. Have a great day.

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