EndlessVoid

storys readable. but its basically a bread sandwich. something to read but ultimately since its edited AI it goes on and on with nothing really happening. like all this editors other stories.

I can't figure out why this story is hitting so hard. keep up the great work!

should do a better job of editing the AI this feels like the 20th time this conversation has been had. at least theres no pool this time. and he even spent the night at Gloria's and all we get is the robotic arm kid. seriously?

seriously I come back to see if anything has change and you've gone from one or two word conversations to absolutely no dialouge in chapters. please drop this story

yeah this app us filling up with ai. can't find a decent fic now

I was enjoying it in the beginning. however about 16 chapters in it feels like he quit editing the ai because one character went from a bossy little spitfire of a girl to a robot who has no emotions. early on the kids are trying to keep the pokemon evolution a secret and about halfway through they are surprised seeing the evolved pokemon. shame tho I really liked the concept. to bad the "author" gave up and went full ai that over explains and complicates the plot heavy.

why has lily been changed into a robot since Cid was introduced?

with the pokemon in the lowest form why is this a clefairy rather than cleffa the baby form?

it will be fine if you spend some time with the mc and Rosalie actually being together. they went on a date then the next day he went to her house and spent more time gaming and now we have this wolf situation. idk why he was even involved when the tribe has dealt with this for generations.

this plot is all out of whack. the bolt was just stolen tho percy has been at camp for 6 months? Sally was taken for what just giggles?