I give my honest opinion, a lot of comedy, system with unnecessary consciousness only for plot, the MC is a boy below average, he sees no difference between program and reality, he is the lapdog of ayakanoji, everyone lowered their intelligence to give the reason to the MC, the personality of the MC is weak, shy, naïve, there are many scenes of him speaking based on his future knowledge without arguments, as nagumo is mentioned without having met him and as soon as he enters, he does not ask the system Since he managed so that the school would not be suspicious of the points extracted in the system, he did not use the things he was given in the amount.
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Smol_frog:Why do people who give one star reviews always like there own reviews but people who give 5 stars never do??? A mystery!!!!
one star reviews are basically the frustrated replies of a user,when one is frustrated with anything the person wants to get it out of his system just like that it resulted in 1 star review if a person is frustrated with the story. Well now onto five star, the secret is... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . people are just lazy
Smol_frog:Why do people who give one star reviews always like there own reviews but people who give 5 stars never do??? A mystery!!!!
there is some false in your review...like the mc being ayakanoji lapdog? you do know ayakanoji treat everyone like his pawn right? and mc is the first person he met of course he became his lapdog then, mc being shy, weak and naive? means you dont read enough or carefully cause he will changes the characters have lower intelligence? of course obviously this isn't original novel do you expect author to make them smart like original he is still normal human and too much unnecessary information is bothersome school points affect system points?...we dont need long a*s explanation in the first place system power is a reality wrapping no offense just my review in your comment \(·-·)/
First of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did First of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did First of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did orFirst of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system for that since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did or cFirst of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did or comFirst of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did or comohdFirst of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about that since from there we can get that he is naïve, he never questioned how he did it or how he didFirst of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did or First of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did the system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to 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everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve the system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve, hethe system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve, he sthe system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve, he sigthe system, where he came from, who created it, 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humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve, follows the gamethe system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve, follows the game, andthe system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve, follows the game, etc.the system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve, follows the game, etcmthe system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve, follows the game, etc.the system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve, follows the game, etc.
As you define boy, perhaps the totulo says "a normal boy with a system"?, could have chosen any type of boy, not a famboy of ayakanoji and mental retardation, also as I said, this boy is low average, there are more intelligent boys does not have to be silly just because I use the word "boy"
ADD:The title says "a boy with a system", did you come to read it expecting a giga chad? In my opinion the author only wrote what he proposed to write, he did not deceive you at any time, his review is very unfair
We are talking about fanfics, when an author wants an intelligent protagonist he makes a man reincarnate in the body of a young man, saying that a boy reincarnated in the body of a boy practically screams that the protagonist will be at least immature. You have no experience in this field, it seems like you started reading fanfics yesterday. The author didn't even post the classic garbage prologue talking about the genius that the mc was in childhood until he suffered an unfortunate accident and reincarnated, if the protagonist has common sense the authors will already be screaming in the prologue that they are wonder boys, geniuses with 300Qi and etc.
Yack6:As you define boy, perhaps the totulo says "a normal boy with a system"?, could have chosen any type of boy, not a famboy of ayakanoji and mental retardation, also as I said, this boy is low average, there are more intelligent boys does not have to be silly just because I use the word "boy"
Who among you here have finished reading this long text, be honest
Yack6:First of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did First of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did First of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did orFirst of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system for that since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did or cFirst of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did or comFirst of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did or comohdFirst of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about that since from there we can get that he is naïve, he never questioned how he did it or how he didFirst of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did or First of all about intelligence, everything can be done with effort I have seen normal people do readings of 5 chapters and leave me wanting to see more, it is also clear that he did it intentional since apparently the world revolves around comedy and development, and about the system it is obvious that the feeling changes reality so that it does not look suspicious, the only thing that bothers me is that the Mc does not ask the system about it since from there we can get that it is naïve, it was never questioned as it did the system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend which he is already the system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already inthe system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already ingnthe system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already ingnuothe system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve the system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never questioned the system and believed everything and weak because he complains about going back to school that shows how weak he is mentally, also physically in the chapter where he was beaten I do not say of the body I say of the technique because if he were strong they would not have humiliated him, lapdog because it is seen that he did not show caution towards ayakanoji and wanted to be his friend who is already naïve, hethe system, where he came from, who created it, because he chose it is naïve because he never 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