As of chp70 this is … this basically a disappointment , it begun with a somewhat inlikable beginning with alot of " comedy " now if its actually funny or not is another story , and it became quit very .. very clear in the last chapters yhat the author doesnt really take this work serious anymore and is starting to get ready for the infamous " umlimited hiatus " , so yh if you're here expecting some sort of serious and enjoyable read then just make a 180 and go back unless you want a mess of forced "comedy" , unlikable mc and not very smart very smart characters
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Who ever said it was a serious story? Also when did I say i would drop it?? I just don't understand what I'm doing wrong smh
You're doing the interaction between characters wrong and repetitive , the jokes are repetitive, the mc character is unlikable and inconsistent , the other cannon characters have all fallen under a stupify spell or something , basically the story is all over the place even for a comedic one . So yh thats why i am disappointed after expecting much more of this ff from the first few chapters
Smol_frog:Who ever said it was a serious story? Also when did I say i would drop it?? I just don't understand what I'm doing wrong smh
Tbh when people make fanfic they don’t have to follow the MC especially in cote u can just live ur life pass class n make some private points u don’t have to help the class advance like the mc u don’t have to do anything just be good at sports n studies. Then u can do ur own thing like join the score club n make him go on his own trips but if u just follow the MC it’s get boring not only that he just follows people around that’s pathetic tbh n no one will want to read that. I’ll give this a try then tell u where u went wrong hopefully it ain’t as bad as every1 is saying. N just enjoy writing
Smol_frog:Who ever said it was a serious story? Also when did I say i would drop it?? I just don't understand what I'm doing wrong smh
