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Definition of 100 percent loyalty: doubting your lord if he will abandon you, spying on him and questioning his intentions, peering into his soul—that would make more sense if his loyalty was less than 100%. But in this situation it's illogical, I mean

Okay, who can answer why, if the hero can't bombard enemies with her magic, would it count as her murder because she provoked it or what?He would have to kill his hero one by one in a fight against hordes.

Okay, look, several similar phrases and scenes are repeated, only changing a few things. Like, how is the MC going to decide whether to help or not? He already helped with the light shield, and now he's thinking about helping with the bridge. Something easier to do: if you're going to help, then finish helping until the end, without making excuses. Besides, he said it was a good thing he doesn't use mana for his powers, and then he said he'd tell the system that...He gives mana potions, which contradicts what seems like a mixture and repetition in a cycle.

Many scenes are repeated, such as this time with a mask watching the game when it was already shown in the previous chapter and this time in a different way, or in previous chapters the car scene

Weren't they level 6? After defeating the level 7 marmora when they were level 5, they were promoted to level 6.

I have to admit that this book is very good. I like the MC's personality, the girls' reactions, their personalities and thoughts, and their interactions with the MC and the world in general. Aside from that, the world feels a little empty; there aren't many appearances of random or insignificant characters, and only the essentials are shown. I'd like it to feel fuller and more alive, although for now I'm loving it.

I'm talking about the civil war

It doesn't matter if he's using AI as long as he's checking and making sure it's done correctly and adding his own touch, since some authors do go overboard when using AI.

Very good idea, very good story, simple plot that makes you want more, I would say it's very good, the only problem would be the grammar and writing.

What on earth happened from someone calm to a teenager who can't control his emotions and acts in an exaggerated way...