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I didn't mention this in previous chapters because I thought someone else would comment on it or the author himself would, but the fact that the MC doesn't take it seriously, seeing the monsters that They're going to come and destroy his planet, and seeing what happened to the other dimensions where those monsters came from, how can he not take it seriously? And what about the MC's vassal lords, Kaguya?They're not enough, quality isn't better than quantity, the vassal lords she has certainly can't beat one of the MC, how irritating everything has become, besides the MC's powers Where it shows that he got the highest score and I see another with better power (the fact that he has the power of time but is weak doesn't mean anything because in another world he can Changing those disadvantages so it's still overpowered) now the same power of the MC where the author says it's at the level of a high demon and with its speed at an almost supreme one, what a joke, right? The MC's power was to multiply his base speed by who knows how many times, and seeing how his enemies can react to that speed, it doesn't make sense; it seems like the Flash nerf also made sense. It seems to be included, because it would be impossible for others to react at their speed; another thing in Kaguya's betrayal and the ambush by the other lords, it is shown how those lords They treat it like a game and keep winning; the MC is shown worn out, and in the next episode, the MC easily defeats them—it makes no sense, and there are other scenes with no coherence. Scenes, that's where I'll leave it because all I see is the MC getting crushed when he's supposed to be "the most powerful"

Definition of 100 percent loyalty: doubting your lord if he will abandon you, spying on him and questioning his intentions, peering into his soul—that would make more sense if his loyalty was less than 100%. But in this situation it's illogical, I mean

Okay, who can answer why, if the hero can't bombard enemies with her magic, would it count as her murder because she provoked it or what?He would have to kill his hero one by one in a fight against hordes.

Okay, look, several similar phrases and scenes are repeated, only changing a few things. Like, how is the MC going to decide whether to help or not? He already helped with the light shield, and now he's thinking about helping with the bridge. Something easier to do: if you're going to help, then finish helping until the end, without making excuses. Besides, he said it was a good thing he doesn't use mana for his powers, and then he said he'd tell the system that...He gives mana potions, which contradicts what seems like a mixture and repetition in a cycle.

Many scenes are repeated, such as this time with a mask watching the game when it was already shown in the previous chapter and this time in a different way, or in previous chapters the car scene

Weren't they level 6? After defeating the level 7 marmora when they were level 5, they were promoted to level 6.

I have to admit that this book is very good. I like the MC's personality, the girls' reactions, their personalities and thoughts, and their interactions with the MC and the world in general. Aside from that, the world feels a little empty; there aren't many appearances of random or insignificant characters, and only the essentials are shown. I'd like it to feel fuller and more alive, although for now I'm loving it.

I'm talking about the civil war

It doesn't matter if he's using AI as long as he's checking and making sure it's done correctly and adding his own touch, since some authors do go overboard when using AI.

Very good idea, very good story, simple plot that makes you want more, I would say it's very good, the only problem would be the grammar and writing.