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Ooommnii
OoommniiLv42yr
2022-12-28 00:51

Got scammed by those reviews. It's only good in first 4 chapters. When the system arrives everything become a mess. The MC's character also have a problem he's so cringe and whines a lot like a typical Chinese mc. Also it's a life simulator system but I haven't seen him do a life simulation. He just come in that world then leave after he gets the power.

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thelightedghost
thelightedghostAuthor

So you didn't like the system and publish it as a review? Lol .

Ooommnii
OoommniiLv4

Nah bro. I feel like his character just went down hill when the system arrives. He became so cringe and whiny hope he could be more mature. I don't have any problem with the system aside too much spoon feeding the mc. Anyway it's your story so just do what you want. but I'm out.

Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1

get rid of all the xp/spam 5 star reviews before complaining about the low ratings.

thelightedghost:So you didn't like the system and publish it as a review? Lol .
thelightedghost
thelightedghostAuthor

I have removed many 5 star reviews because of spam and I have only removed 1 star reviews with no actual context..

Tim_QQQ:get rid of all the xp/spam 5 star reviews before complaining about the low ratings.
Hiraeth_999
Hiraeth_999Lv4

it's kinda true though. After mc got the system he became very cringe

thelightedghost:So you didn't like the system and publish it as a review? Lol .
ALEX1402
ALEX1402Lv4

Are you sure you are the author of this fic bro? Cause the marvel and naruto fanfics are really good compared to this.

thelightedghost:I have removed many 5 star reviews because of spam and I have only removed 1 star reviews with no actual context..
IMDOOMED
IMDOOMEDLv14

Your comment is meaningless. You've just stated that you don't like the fact that the system pampers the main character, but if that's the case, it means you don't like systems. A system that doesn't do this is useless. A system is supposed to support the protagonist and confer many benefits, including grooming, because that's one of the main benefits of having a system, and that's why we like systems. If you didn't like system-style novels, you wouldn't have formulated such a meaningless paragraph.

Ooommnii:Nah bro. I feel like his character just went down hill when the system arrives. He became so cringe and whiny hope he could be more mature. I don't have any problem with the system aside too much spoon feeding the mc. Anyway it's your story so just do what you want. but I'm out.
Onigami
OnigamiLv5

harem/?

thelightedghost:So you didn't like the system and publish it as a review? Lol .
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I'm no professional reviewer or anything like that, just a guy who has decided to give his two cents about what he read. I've read up to ch. 108, so this review will be based upon that progress. Writing Quality: 4/5 - Just some minor issues that make you have to re-read some portions to properly understand what was just said or who just said what. Stability of Updates: 4/5 - There were already over 100+ chapters when I started reading this and I haven't yet experienced any sort of wait time for a release. I feel it'd be unfair if I were to give a 5/5 just for having a sizable backlog of chapters. Story Development: 3/5 - The linear progress of the story stays the same as original One Piece story, so far. Other than the original One Piece story already being there, the novel feels more like a reactionary experience to seeing how things are different now with the crew having their 'upgrades'. Character Design: 4/5 - Due to the MC's ability, we get to see some slight changes in the character of the crew, which is nice. It makes sense, at least to me it did. The MC though, I feel he's been like a good character so far, not great just good. Like I mentioned before, I'm not a professional reviewer or anything, so I can't quite describe 'Why' I feel this way about the MC. I just feel like he's missing something to really make him be fleshed out. World Background: 5/5 - I'm not the biggest One Piece fact-fiend around, but I'd like to think I can say that the things that happen in the background and stuff like that make sense. Overview: So, should you spend you time reading this novel? I'd say yeah. If you like One Piece then give it a shot. I'll prepare you now though and say that the MC does share his 'ability' (it's a system) with his friends and family, but don't let that stop you from enjoying the novel. It's different, yes, but it's not bad. I'll do an edit to this review once the novel gets to 150+ chapters to give an update on my thoughts.

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