thelightedghost

The one piece is already being rewritten and it has actually started since people wanted to rewrite . Game in marvel will also be rewritten and multiverse should end soon

Sorry brother overwhelming majority asked for rewrite which has already started

Fixed it

M Good now

Uptil now , no. I will include when the time is right

I would really really love to stop explaining some points but people are so dumb . They won't read . Some of them didn't even read the clause and didn't understand later what I wrote and left a one star review (yes I deleted them ) but god damn there are multiple of them

Yeah i can see that .. But m saying the 4th wall break was only for humor. And the reason I spoke of spice is because someone like you commented and very very rudely about my writing and he complained and complained . Made me rewrite . Yes I know that it has plot holes which I m going to exploit .

I have done the 4th wall break for like 2 times I believe . I know webnovel standards are trash so I don't consider that . But you forget that it's a fan fiction . You can't go on adding spice to known characters . You can add only to the MC but that too is limited . Now if it's a Harry potter fan fiction then it's different because that story is more than a power fantasy . But naruto is straight up power fantasy . Mcu can be argued as kind of different but that too has limits .

Is that a problem ? If I don't use it , people complain . If I use it , I am seeing people are still complaining .

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