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MoogleKing
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2022-12-12 10:47

I don't like the story but I won't really comment on how objectively good or bad the story is so i'll give 3 stars for fairness and list some of the red flags this story has for me personally 1. The Mc shares his system with others and gets nothing in return which is the biggest factor in me dropping the story. I don't mind him giving away power once the Mc is invincible or can revoke the power at any time however that just isn't the case in this one. 2. This is a simulator system and the character he simulates begins to affect his personality. 3. He joins the straw hats. I don't personally mind this one as much but it is a bit annoying how much of a fanboy he is. If any of these things are red flags for you, you should read something else. If not then give it a shot.

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thelightedghost
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At least you are honest on your opinions. And answering the sharing part. Do any of the straw hat deserve to get their power stripped away?

MoogleKing
MoogleKingLv2

No, I just have a strong desire for control and that translates into my taste for books. I always like the MC to be in a dominant/invincible position and really don't like when the MC has a rival with equal or greater potential even if they are his allies.

thelightedghost:At least you are honest on your opinions. And answering the sharing part. Do any of the straw hat deserve to get their power stripped away?
thelightedghost
thelightedghostAuthor

I once had that same ideology. And then I realized it becomes boring at the end. Such stories hardly last for more than 200 chapters. Having absolute control means there is nothing left.

MoogleKing:No, I just have a strong desire for control and that translates into my taste for books. I always like the MC to be in a dominant/invincible position and really don't like when the MC has a rival with equal or greater potential even if they are his allies.
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