the synopsis is useless, the origin story is rushed and lazy. the author changes the personality's of characters randomly (katara is okay with mc slaughtering teenagers?) and the smut/romance is dogshit. one of the worst stories on the site

if you want to call being on the same frame of reference overused thats fine. also, the mc doesn't need to be better than their elders, just their age group (at least for wish fulfilment).

written well. mc acts a little autistic due to merging? with the kaiju devil fruits personality. the story starts at the rocks era which is always fun to read. its a bit of a crack fic as the mc gains strength very fast and dosent focus at all on training. brief mentions of it if anything. if thats your thing this is a fun read .

its AI edited 100%, the writing is much better than MTLs like google translate but it translates the spell named into proper English (scourgify was called "clean up") making it clear a human basically did nothing in the translating/editing process. the Chinese idioms and cultural norms also bleed into the story making it worse. in other words its a very lazy translation made better only because the AI/translating program used was decent

its written well. i got to chapter 25 but the downsides started to outweigh the positives of the story imo. too many disgustingly broken au elements, the mc is too strong too early. the mc starts roleplaying as a shelby and an evil wizard from the lord of the rings, honestly its just cringe most of the time. just try to imagine an 11 year old acting this way and you would just laugh at how cringe it is. anyway, the au elements didnt add to the story, just made it worse in my opinion. personally i think this is a 1 or 2 star, but its written well and if you like heavy au with an op mc this might be for you

imagine being granted wishes by a god and wishing to become some freakish fishman hybrid with tiny wings on your ankles................ lmao

fking trash. this must have been written by an AI or something. 95% of the chapters are completely fucking useless. you can skip at least 80% of the chapters and still know whats going on. the author drags out one meaningless conversation over 4-5 chapters. the most boring novel ive seen.

im almost certain ive read this before somewhere else. maybe fanfiction . net. regardless, its just a boring follow the golden trio novel . . . .

dont know why, seems to just be lazy writing imo. its a way to force character growth when you dont know how to write it properly.

an omnipotent god gives mc three wishes, his first changes only his physical appearance, and the third wish changes his cock size. his only seemingly useful wish was the second which gave him Uchiha lineage. this is only the beginning of a long list of retarded problems that I couldn't be bothered repeating here. its just trash.

the translation is not the worst but still quite bad. the spacing and sentence structure of the novel is dogshit. the author makes shit up as he goes along too, making this an AU. for example, almost immediately the newly reincarnated person starts designing and forming a magical core in the harry potter verse. this is 100% chinese trash or something similar.

the author isnt really transparent with the synopsis. the abilities this mc has are retarded and have nothing to do with paragon. he literally just gets everyone elses power if they are within a certain range of this mc (he gets the powers permanently and their experiences with it so he can use them perfectly). be it the dcu or mcu this would immediately make this character a god like being like amazo but better. boring.

pretty good start. i hope you can redeem some of his siblings. in almost all the fanfics of the greek gods they all turn out the same, disgusting rapists and schemers. keeping the OG that were in the stomach with him as decent people would be better IMO. the greeks went too realistic with their gods tbh

just as a side note, the translator is doing well. the original MTL version of this novel is unreadable dogshit dont bother looking it up

many slice of life chapters about the father/daughter and husband/wife relationships. it focuses much more on the family bonding slice of life rather than his mangaka career. he's only published one manga in 34 chapters and its been mentioned briefly.

the problem is the teacher confirming it without an exchange of points. in the first month, any student can learn of it from their own observations, but if they wanted it confirmed, it would require way more points that they would have/classpoints potentially. arisu being a genius and figuring it out on her own is irrelevant, her home room teacher didn't tell her.

you cant translate others work for profit without permission. the only reason people get away with it here is because of a divide in culture. chinese authors will never know of what we do with their work, thats it. almost all decent countries have this intellectual property law.

its one of those fanfics you cant just help but wonder why it was ever written. it literally just follows the manga word for word but adds a annoying know it all chinese dude to the mix. lmao

Are you an idiot? Even with translations you can't (in any decent country) republish someone's intellectual property. The only reason he would not be asked to remove this is because the original author is Chinese and would never see it. So in any country where English readers are likely to read this its a felony (please research intellectual property or do you just not care cuz the original author is chinese?). And I find it hilarious that you only mention that point, when my original review was mainly pointing out the fact that its simply inappropriate to post novels here. its a fanfic section. the fanfiction section of this website is already flooded with Chinese fanfics, Ai stories, other MTL trash, and this, which is just straight up not a fanfic. Work on your reading comprehension skills before writing again please.

Persona was the key word of my original review. The mc had some selfish thoughts and did some questionable things, but it was how he portrayed himself to others that bothered me.. hence, 'persona'. I see this in many novels that go for the multiple persona MC, where the mc wears so many different masks depending on who they are talking to that it gets annoying. Especially if the author doesn't write in a way that's consistent (the mcs actions not making sense based on what was previously written for example). Just my personal gripe with the trope.