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Most Chinese system novels, except when they go too far, don’t have overpowered systems. That’s why I don’t really like them. They limit their systems too much, and it gets annoying. A good example is The Witcher: Divine Hunter—the author had to rush the ending because the system made the MC progress too slowly. In the end, many Chinese system novels suffer from this issue: their systems are too weak, almost all of them.

So in short, from all what you said, that would mean, this danzo, is more stupid than the original one ? ? Damn… thank for the renew I would surely be traumatized if I would have to discover it by myself

Why ? All other girls are asshole toward him, only Hinata love him with true love, be together is just fair

He can’t, he don’t have any ability that he can share

Game of thrones - John Artic is the proof itself that with John snow that didnt knew the plot only, you can do a good fan fiction, the best between the best, but as you said it’s my opinion, I get it

I think you're all seriously misunderstanding how genuine cultivation worlds actually work. In nearly all authentic Xianxia universes, the very structure of reality is fundamentally altered. Planets, space, living beings, and—most importantly—the laws of physics and nature become incredibly dense and stable. That's precisely why high-level cultivators, despite their immense strength, can't casually destroy a planet on a whim like in Dragon Ball. It's not due to their weakness; rather, their environment itself is extremely dense and resistant. If a Dragon Ball fighter—even at godly levels—were transported into a genuine Xianxia universe, their power would immediately become severely restricted, unable to cause massive destruction. This isn't simply a matter of raw power or energy; it's because the natural laws of that universe wouldn't allow it. Even if, by some miracle, those laws temporarily ignored that fighter, he would still find himself heavily restricted, as the universe itself is fundamentally different and far more resilient than his original world. You must realize that Dragon Ball logic is completely different from authentic cultivation worlds. In Dragon Ball, there's no clearly defined cultivation realm or breakthrough; characters essentially stay at the same level, merely accumulating and refining raw energy. In true cultivation universes (like in Xianxia), each realm represents a radical shift in capabilities and natural limits. Power is structured and codified in clear stages, unlike in Dragon Ball, where it's a linear accumulation without distinct realm breakthroughs. Regarding Xuanhuan, the confusion arises because there are two distinctly different types: - Some Xuanhuan worlds are indeed relatively weak, closer to the real world with just slightly enhanced energy levels. In such universes, a Dragon Ball fighter might indeed dominate. - However, in Xuanhuan universes strongly inspired by Xianxia, featuring complex cultivation systems, power scales, and restrictive universal laws, even the most powerful Dragon Ball characters would find themselves significantly nerfed. In short, comparing Dragon Ball to genuine cultivation worlds is impossible without considering these critical factors. This is exactly why I find your reasoning absurd: you're overlooking the fact that Dragon Ball power is unrestricted and raw, whereas in authentic cultivation worlds, power is strictly regulated by the universe's very laws. This fundamental difference is why your comparison simply doesn't make sense or hold up logically.

I think you're all seriously misunderstanding how genuine cultivation worlds actually work. In nearly all authentic Xianxia universes, the very structure of reality is fundamentally altered. Planets, space, living beings, and—most importantly—the laws of physics and nature become incredibly dense and stable. That's precisely why high-level cultivators, despite their immense strength, can't casually destroy a planet on a whim like in Dragon Ball. It's not due to their weakness; rather, their environment itself is extremely dense and resistant. If a Dragon Ball fighter—even at godly levels—were transported into a genuine Xianxia universe, their power would immediately become severely restricted, unable to cause massive destruction. This isn't simply a matter of raw power or energy; it's because the natural laws of that universe wouldn't allow it. Even if, by some miracle, those laws temporarily ignored that fighter, he would still find himself heavily restricted, as the universe itself is fundamentally different and far more resilient than his original world. You must realize that Dragon Ball logic is completely different from authentic cultivation worlds. In Dragon Ball, there's no clearly defined cultivation realm or breakthrough; characters essentially stay at the same level, merely accumulating and refining raw energy. In true cultivation universes (like in Xianxia), each realm represents a radical shift in capabilities and natural limits. Power is structured and codified in clear stages, unlike in Dragon Ball, where it's a linear accumulation without distinct realm breakthroughs. Regarding Xuanhuan, the confusion arises because there are two distinctly different types: - Some Xuanhuan worlds are indeed relatively weak, closer to the real world with just slightly enhanced energy levels. In such universes, a Dragon Ball fighter might indeed dominate. - However, in Xuanhuan universes strongly inspired by Xianxia, featuring complex cultivation systems, power scales, and restrictive universal laws, even the most powerful Dragon Ball characters would find themselves significantly nerfed. In short, comparing Dragon Ball to genuine cultivation worlds is impossible without considering these critical factors. This is exactly why I find your reasoning absurd: you're overlooking the fact that Dragon Ball power is unrestricted and raw, whereas in authentic cultivation worlds, power is strictly regulated by the universe's very laws. This fundamental difference is why your comparison simply doesn't make sense or hold up logically.

The trials aren’t explored in depth, and everything moves too fast. The chapters are extremely short, lacking detail, and end way too quickly. At times, certain things are unnecessarily repeated, and those little event titles before each scene give the story a choppy feel. Sometimes, it even feels like an AI-generated novel, as if the text was just summarized rather than fully developed. The nine chapters you’ve translated could have been fleshed out more, making the story far more immersive. ⸻ Steve Jobs himself is a major issue. Despite all the hardships he faces, he doesn’t change. He never questions himself, and he remains stuck in a rigid and sterile morality that makes no sense in the Game of Thrones universe. In his original world, it was borderline acceptable (though still excessive), but in Westeros, it’s completely unrealistic. There, moral flexibility is essential—characters are meant to be gray, not frozen in an idealistic mindset that has zero connection to the world he’s in. Normally, these trials should have shaped him, turning him into someone more adapted to this brutal world, a true hero. But in the end, it feels like he hasn’t learned anything except how to fight. He’s still the same soldier, with an unrealistically good personality. All these challenges have no real impact on him. He doesn’t change, he doesn’t mature, and it lacks realism and depth. ⸻ Another big issue: missed potential in his arrival. I expected him to arrive in Game of Thrones as a baby, with us following his accelerated yet logical growth. But that’s not the case, and it hurts immersion. The core idea is brilliant, but the execution falls short. Honestly, if you ever write a similar novel with the same concept but using Jon Snow as the protagonist, it would make far more sense. Jon already has the perfect personality to evolve into a true hero of Westeros. I don’t know if you’ve read Game of Thrones – Jon Arctic, but it’s a fantastic example of how to do a Game of Thrones fanfiction right

Jon Snow is the only truly unique figure in this world. Creating another character with the same level of uniqueness breaks immersion. The fanfiction might still be good, but not the best. And I’m not saying Game of Thrones: Jon Arctic is the best just because Jon Snow is the MC, but because of many other factors. Other fanfictions can work without Jon Snow, but they will just be ‘good’ novels. However, they will lack the key elements that create full immersion, making them feel less deeply connected to the world. If a fanfiction aims to be the best, then making Jon Snow the main character, without prior knowledge of the plot and without being a self-insert, is a mandatory requirement.

Why chapter are so short? All 9 chapter should merged into one