Evaluation: Subpar (Not my cup of tea & please avoid removing reviews that has sense). WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development (we already new bout OP-verse) it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MC is just like an observer which hugs thigh of Luffy just to follow the plot. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for OPverse. Lacks utilization of OPverse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed. 3/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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