The scenes don't make any sense, I understand it's a novel and more of a fanfic, but if you're going to do a novel at least make it have some logic or sense champion of numerous street fights... his father, adrunkard can hit him and do whatever he wants... he has bullies and the only thing he does to them is a random beating and he's done... What happened: mc's father steals all his money, mc hits him a little and leaves. bullings grab him and want to break his head with an iron, he hits them gently and leaves... What should happen: Father mc steals his money and mc smashes his face or destroys his car... bullings grab him and try to hit him with an iron, mc defends himself and breaks their arms.
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I will completely ignore what you said.
So you mean to have no self control over your own actions and be an edgy teen who likes to go against society because it's unfair so you enact your own dissatisfaction and portray the acts of injustice society has done to you? Well no thanks tbh everyone's different. Doing stuff like that just sounds exhausting and unnecessary. Better to just focus on your own life.
(First, think like the mc, he fights street fights, he doesn't fight in the ring, I don't know if you know what street fights are, but it is normal that they end in 3 ways, first knocked out, the second is that one of the competitors breaks one or two bones and he surrenders and the third is that he dies, either by accident or because his contender killed him on purpose) Now back to the topic, being you or the mc. So you're telling me that if someone tries to kill you or cripple you for life, you'd just punch them and let them go? Or if someone steals all your money that you earned with sweat, tears and blood in search of a better future, would you just let him go with a simple threat?
You mean like father attempts murder, kill him, bullies kill him, teacher kill him. Basically like every major cultivation stories out there?Until you reach peng clan's young master or some sumn. Well personally I'd just prove evidence to police and just go away and not associate with those kinds of people. The street fights, I agree but not to the parents, bullies or anyone who "courts death" :)
Why do you come to the conclusion that the mc needs to kill them? It just has to make them regret facing it, if the thugs break a bone or 2 like grabbing the crowbar and break their knee or arm, and the father could easily wreck his car, and so you don't say nonsense there are many ways to ruin a car, for example break the headlights and windows, or start the car and put a hose and throw water in the gasoline tank, break the seats with a knife, there are many methods to ruin the car. and these 2 the father and the bullies are an example after that it makes more stupid.
Ah yes, well maybe you're right but too late I guess the fic has already been written then posted. So anyway thanks for being informative.
He starts hurting the bullies a lot after a point in the story, so I don't understand his anger. As for the father, I'll honestly pretend I didn't read that. It made me sigh with frustration to see how you believe that destroying his father's car would help anything.
to begin with, the mc has no education, he is someone who never went to school, (they tell you that at the beginning), continuing, the mc spent his entire life in the midst of violence in street fights, not fights in the ring, but street fights Third, you tell me that after they tried to cripple him and then took ALL of his life savings, along with his hopes and dreams of living a "normal" or better life. After all those reasons and deductions, do you tell me that the MC wouldn't try to take revenge or get even in some way, but he would behave like a logical person and restrain himself?
Have you even read the story? From what you're saying, I'm sure you haven't, you seem to have just relied on other readers' assessments, because your summary is completely different from the story I wrote.
Yes, I have read the fanfic if there are other people who have the same opinion as me and have evaluated it in a similar way, that means that either we are right or our point of view of the fanfic is the same or similar. After all this is done to evaluate according to the criteria of the reader, not the author. If you as an author do not want to pay attention to what the evaluations say, you have every right to ignore them and continue with your life as it is.
That sounds completely like an excuse. The MC didn't spend his whole life in street fights, he was a professional boxer, moreover, he was not someone without education, so much so that he was considered one of the fittest in his school. This information is in chapters 1 to 5. And man, "hopes to live a normal life"? Where is this? The MC wanted the money to move and focus on his career. It seems that your answer is just an excuse, and a way to make me feel bad. I really don't care for evaluations from someone who has not even bothered to read my story.
you pretty much made him a slave/servant so he can gain strength. what is the point of being strong if you are under someone.
Under whom?
ch 41 fang of metsudo
But that's literally why someone wants to become stronger, to surpass those at the top. If you wanted the main character to become the most powerful in the first few chapters, then this story isn't for you.
no i get your point but now he stuck being the fang. he's stuck being a servant to someone weaker than him. yeah he may be strong but will still listen to his "master".
I understand, but the reason why Yuji chose to become the next fang will be explored at the end of the tournament. The character never wanted to serve anyone.
look it up in chapter 35. your the one writing how did you forgot what you made.?
