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This is not to insult or offend anyone, this is my opinion. I honestly don't know what I was expecting when I started reading this, but I must say that I ended up disappointed. many totally unnecessary time jumps, the "plot" advances very quickly, the power levels are a disaster, more than anything the powers of the characters, the clear example is in the rating game chapters, the MC having difficulties with someone who He only attacks with fire, one of his powers being the embodiment of the concept of fire... Another thing is the severe nerf that both the MC and his friends have, who are herrschers, incarnations of concepts, beings capable of destroying countries - continents from birth... according to the power level of dxd they would be seredñs from maximum Satan to super demons or god kings like Zeus, amatersu
well... if you read doulou dalu, or soul land , 2,3,4 and legend of the gods realm you will notice that tang sang its a reverend son of a bitch, he used his daugther, split her soul, used her and his "husband" (huo yuhao), uses and manipulate his son Tang wuling, and even let him die, and not talk about his grandson... he let his friend wife to die, he not teach his friend about the techniques he have, He did many other things like putting the abyss in the douluo world, making millions die, and not taking care of it, or letting his parents solve it just to let his son have the chance to become a god. soo the chinese have a point in hate tang san
If you want more views or more power stones, you need to put your efforts in 1 novel, personally the one who like me more of all it's this. Next try to make longer chapters , and then wait to reach 100 - 130 chapters, it's when all of the novel got their grow up. If you want to read something, when it hace a few dozen it make less interesting, but you can compense whit longer chapter of you want to make more whit lees chapter's.
Honestly speaking, I don't want to offend or insult anyone, this is just my opinion. This sucks, it is literally and exactly the same as the original, although it barely changes, but in the end there is no difference, this is so exact that the mc is the same as the same actions, in the end we have a pathetic Japanese beta mc. He has the power to do what he wants but in the end he is a little dog just like the original mc in the book, the girls' interactions with the mc, everyone's attitude to the mc and the mc's interactions with the world suck, they are the same to the original, this cannot be considered ff, at most it is a summary of the original, because what covers 200 chaps in the other this one covers in 20, that is the difference. so for me its a solid 1 star, 0 story developement, 0 character design and 0 world background. i only put 1 star because i can't put 0
Although I don't like the novel, the one punch man side is easy to understand, the thing is one punch man in the manga has a loot of chapters , but if you put it in a novel it's only about 60- 70 chapters because in one punch are a lot of images of the fights and scenes, who in the text can be resumed in one o le two paragraphs.
I don't plan to insult or offend anyone it's just my point of view. Sincerely this sucks for me, the mc and the situation around him feels to stupid, like he isn't being able to use correctly the power of light being born from the strongest angel (this is Canon) and a seraph no else. And don't mention the intelligence and actions of the mc, a grown man reborned... The interaction between characters and the MC really sucks, the "development" of the mc too. If the mc was born from a low angel and the mc has mental problems all will have sense, whit the things being as now the story sucks