Salmon_El_Solomon

Honestly, I don't know what you hope to achieve by defending the indefensible. Like the other person said, there are a thousand ways to do it differently, but no, you just keep following the same old, boring clichés, with zero originality. All of Akikan's works, including this one, are idiotic, a mix of a couple of boring Chinese fanfics. If you've read one or two of those, you already know how this whole mess will develop. And no, I'm not going to write a fanfic; I don't have the time.

Do you plan to continue it and write your own ending? Or leave it with the crappy development and ending of the original?

The mc is found by japanese, but the name is american... Nice brain author... A very very logical name style... Seriously if the start is like this, don't be expecting anything better.

I agree with you. Back then, there were only two renowned pirate gangs: the Golden Company and the Smiling Knight. Later, the Triad pirates appeared, but they came from three different cities.

This is a Chinese fanfic; chapter 300 was updated yesterday. But in all three novels by the same author, the use of AI is obvious, too obvious; the further the story progresses, the more stupid decisions and actions the protagonist starts making. One of the three is complete, and the story is fine up to chapter 500; after that, the use of AI clearly wreaks havoc.

Soo.... All the interest all the love... All in vain? Sorry but if this wil develop in this way I'm out. If the game world really don't have any significant change in the real world? Why even make full description of the game world, so full of fulfill like Naruto. For that just make the game a past of the mc that it will be revealed in parts, and start with the other of the cultivators. Or whatever shit you make. Cultivators.... When the fanfic is all about magic...

Hay un poco(Todo) de IA en la historia. Sinceramente apesta, interacción de personajes, saltan de desconocidos a conocerte de toda la vida en menos de 1 párrafo o un capítulo, los personajes tienen conocimientos que no deberían tener o entender, desarrollo de mundo, todo apesta. Sinceramente este li no debería ser el ejemplo de como no hacer tu fan fic.

Honestamente esto al comienzo me sorprendió, los primeros 108 capitulos están muy, pero muy buenos, gran desarrollo de personajes, desarrollo de mundo y más. Hasta que llega a la primer "campaña", a partir de ahí todo se va a la mierda. El mc empieza a pensar solo con el pene, el desarrollo de personajes un asco. Al menos si se conviertiera en smut o las escenas R-18 fueran buenas, tendría algunos puntos a favor,pero no el autor siguió algo medio mezclado con escenas R-18 que dan pena, y eso más que la trama pierde todo sentido. Ya después del 108 pareciera que el autor se aburrió de escribir está cosa y simplemente le dejo todo su trabajo a una IA.

You have something done? Or it's a protect to future?

Honestamente esto empieza bien, pero termina siendo una mierda absoluta y total. Aparte de la horrible gramática. Termina siendo solo puros monólogos del mc, 0 de historia, 0 progreso,0 interacción, 0 desarrollo de mundo,0 desarrollo de personajes.