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Master_Celestial
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2022-07-23 02:01

It‘s a decent read, but I dislike the protagonist. He is to kind in my opinion and kinda sticks his nose in everything that could cost him his life just because he doesn‘t like it or so. I stopped at around chapter 5 so it may get better in the future.

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TheJiujitsuGuy
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First of all, spoiler aside; Yuji's personality takes a jump at the end of the Tokyo Revengers arc when, after awakening the Advance, his repressed emotions are released. With the emotional boost serving to cloud his mind of his remorse, he spares no effort to do what he should have done from the moment he became strong enough to face Mikey. In the end, he really feels that he should have been ruthless, as it only led to putting the people close to him in danger.

Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4

That‘s like 20+ chapters in the future

TheJiujitsuGuy:First of all, spoiler aside; Yuji's personality takes a jump at the end of the Tokyo Revengers arc when, after awakening the Advance, his repressed emotions are released. With the emotional boost serving to cloud his mind of his remorse, he spares no effort to do what he should have done from the moment he became strong enough to face Mikey. In the end, he really feels that he should have been ruthless, as it only led to putting the people close to him in danger.
Monsieur_Dreamer
Monsieur_DreamerLv3

Yeah, Character Develement doesn't take a single chapter to happen, who could ever imagine that.

Master_Celestial:That‘s like 20+ chapters in the future
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