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Astralek
AstralekLv22yr
2023-01-12 22:16

The dialogue and interactions are shiver-inducing cringe. The character is a dumb edgy teen that never really grows up. The whole world building, choice of words and story progression are bad. Then there's the incredibly cringey anime crossovers that are not only done poorly but power scaled to match others they in the original lore would get demolished by. An example is the Tokyo Revengers crossover characters. 2/5 stars.

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trueidiocy_577
trueidiocy_577Lv4

I mean, do you want read a fic where his progression is Baki lol? This one still makes sense compared to Baki's image training against dinosaurs or Yujiro's training vs mamoths

trueidiocy_577
trueidiocy_577Lv4

What do you mean edgy lol, he goes with his life like no problem. Where is the edgyness. If you want to read edgy stuff, try Holy_Joker's fics. This one has a minor slice of life feel and major fighting theories. Clearly the author has done some research on like the various fighting styles.

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