you are a great writer I think this story is great but even Scott was only a loser for half an episode are you trying to make a villain or a main character a main character her that has no friends or even true loved ones because your leading to him being adopted right the dad is distant the mom overbearing and possibly the only really supportive relationship he has since Erica Scott stiles all just pity him you've made a character that's in far succeeds his eq maybe that is a little harsh but honestly ur giving him the social life of a school shooter all you need is Lydia or Jackson to run over the coyote and he becomes a serial killer
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But that's the interesting part isn't it? You don't know how the story and MC will develop and can only guess the answer to that. And yes the MC is showing that he is getting a bit villainous. But still, we're just at the beginning of the story. A lot can happen in the future.
