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BASTILLELv132yr
2022-03-27 21:03

I decided to do this review because i expected much more from this fanfic(chapter 11 currently). Very boring reading so far, only thing keeping me from leaving was the mc’s glow up that doesn’t even have a set time to happen. Mc is brave but also very weak(like literally the weakest). Carachters are all anoying including lydia. The moment with the with carval are unreadable(they amount to 3chapters or so) and i just had to skip all of it. Good parts are the perfect grammar And world background the author has built. Sorry for the rant i guess this work just Isn’t for me. For the ones who read this review, don’t get discoraged and give it a try(at least 5 chapter) from there you can tell if you will like it or not.

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Thank you for the honest review

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