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2022-04-04 15:17

the idea was good the grammar was good but sadly the whole weak nerdy kid who get punched in the first day with no reason was just fooking cringe. No seriously the whole interaction of Mc with people and animals is really awkward and some times annoying. Mc just trying to talk smart and funny almost every time with no reason,he can not interact like normal human and is funny how he supposed to be a awkward kid with no friends.but when meet somone he is trying to be a smartass with no reason. i could read only 6.5 chapters and believe me half of them i wanted to dropped it. The story maybe is really good but the way Mc is around People is just plain annoying for me. Give it a try, maybe you like it!

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