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pls change it back to he and she instead of constantly using Justin and Rachel

this is Justin and is Rachel is getting pretty annoying, hope u fix the dialogue. other than that enjoy the story

Merci Beaucoup

thx for the chap, when is Ur new book gonna be updated?

This is a rip off from My Vampire System. At least this chapter.

wasssaaaaa

It already looks like it's gonna be a fun book.

thx for the chap

No way that jay found a way to make these random talents from the game a reality when the apocalypse hits.

Damn, i prolly just forgot the name then if it was already mentioned.