Item: Teen Mage in Teen Wolf
Rating: 2.8
Author: Dary_Dary

Dary_DaryLv12yr

2022-04-11 12:40

honestly the story is not bad but the MC basically the same thing as most hero stories where he is that typical geek cliché very smart but ridiculously weak physically and he suddenly gains super powers in the case of the MC he got taller and stronger speechless he ends up being able to use magic honestly one of the only weaknesses of a mage in almost every stories and that they are physically weak but the MC is basically a super soldier with magic but even with all that the story is not bad it's just not the type I like to read

Teen Mage in Teen Wolf

Quade_The_Unknown

4.7

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Andrew_AlsbrooksLv14

you are a great writer I think this story is great but even Scott was only a loser for half an episode are you trying to make a villain or a main character a main character her that has no friends or even true loved ones because your leading to him being adopted right the dad is distant the mom overbearing and possibly the only really supportive relationship he has since Erica Scott stiles all just pity him you've made a character that's in far succeeds his eq maybe that is a little harsh but honestly ur giving him the social life of a school shooter all you need is Lydia or Jackson to run over the coyote and he becomes a serial killer

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