Item: Teen Mage in Teen Wolf
Rating: 4.2
Author: XGamesSH

XGamesSHLv152yr

2022-04-01 20:22

Honestly, I really do like this fan-fic. Writing quality is good (not that I really looked for grammatical mistakes). Interesting MC, curious how his character will evolve. Naturally, I like the Story Development because i'm a big fan of the tv series teen wolf. The only question I have is if there is like a set time for updated chapters? if so, what are those times? ps: correct me if I made a grammatical mistake because I wanne better my English.

Teen Mage in Teen Wolf

Quade_The_Unknown

4.7

40 Chs

Liked by 5 people

Replies4

Quade_The_UnknownAuthor

Updates are whenever I finish a chapter. And the only mistakes gramatically in your review are minor things. Make sure the ‘i’ in I’m is capitalized. It’s like saying I am so I’m is the correct way. And just making sure the first letter is capitalized in your sentence. Other than that it looks good

2yr

XGamesSHLv15

Thx for the answer and the correction. Looking forward to the next chapter 😁

Quade_The_Unknown:Updates are whenever I finish a chapter. And the only mistakes gramatically in your review are minor things. Make sure the ‘i’ in I’m is capitalized. It’s like saying I am so I’m is the correct way. And just making sure the first letter is capitalized in your sentence. Other than that it looks good

2yr

XGamesSHLv15

Will make sure to keep getting you more power stones!

2yr

Damian0481Lv13

who is the romance?

Quade_The_Unknown:Updates are whenever I finish a chapter. And the only mistakes gramatically in your review are minor things. Make sure the ‘i’ in I’m is capitalized. It’s like saying I am so I’m is the correct way. And just making sure the first letter is capitalized in your sentence. Other than that it looks good

1yr

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