Sen_Tan

Huh present tense. Pass

I think he means spacing like the line breaks

Author can’t even be bothered to use proper capitalization. A lot of mistakes in the writing part. I dont get why a human would upload his work without atleast checking once. Go to grammarly, use ai, IDK. If you dont know proper grammar or other stuff run it through a computer. You have so many tools to succeed. Why does author prevent this novel from being great.

Visual hole

Confused. Mc is giving the “government” literally the most valuable things in human kind and hes repaid with more work. Literally gave the government Planets worth of resources yet hes complaining about being broke… its little oversights like this that are unacceptable and skews the plot and removes my entire suspension of disbelief. The world is pretty but this just really takes me out

Also when I read GAB Ryu could basically do anything. Literally anything you could think of. You dont give omniscience to a character if youre planning to write another one in the same universe. The. It would just be boring

Aslo currency in all awespec books are essentially worthless. Try to figure out how to make currency have some worth. So when mc finds money its actually worthwhile and exciting

Goated

Id rather have them be called idols for that seemed the most accurate

Love this detail. Hot air goes up cold air goes down