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ThePandaCriticLv11yr
2023-05-28 03:12

Waste of a reincarnation, very slow. I read all the chapters. Despite the minor changes it was 1 of the worst GOT fanfic I would've read why? Mc doesn't have any goals or use his knowledge in a way to affect the story. It feels like if u remove the reincarnation as the story might have progressed they seem...its like he's utilizing the knowledge.

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Inevitable_01Lv14

Ohh then tell me if you ever reincarnated as Jon Snow in planetos what changes will you bring to the known story without anyone knowing your identity as Targeryean ...

Zane_TamLv4

Building a spy network, mustering an army, finding or stealing a dragon egg, going to valyria and hoping for the best, Visit my grand uncle and still hope for the best also while am at it bringing alliser thorne and the remaining targaryen loyalists to my side failing that go to the golden company and hope i am in GTO and not ASOIAF, using my stark heritage (spy network) made of rats and birds. Using my stark heritage and removig a few pieces from the board. To get rich create a few games from our world (Chess) search the north moutains and Skane for Cannibal or gold. As you can read quite a lot.

Inevitable_01:Ohh then tell me if you ever reincarnated as Jon Snow in planetos what changes will you bring to the known story without anyone knowing your identity as Targeryean ...
Dcap_NslapahoLv1

the a good idea..pls write a fanfic. would read this. im running out of ff to read. save meeee

Zane_Tam:Building a spy network, mustering an army, finding or stealing a dragon egg, going to valyria and hoping for the best, Visit my grand uncle and still hope for the best also while am at it bringing alliser thorne and the remaining targaryen loyalists to my side failing that go to the golden company and hope i am in GTO and not ASOIAF, using my stark heritage (spy network) made of rats and birds. Using my stark heritage and removig a few pieces from the board. To get rich create a few games from our world (Chess) search the north moutains and Skane for Cannibal or gold. As you can read quite a lot.
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_VIIX_Lv11

Writing Quality: 5/5 This is one of the most decent ones in this platform in terms of writing. The structure is well thought out without much noise. Never felt too cramped. Story Development: 3.5/5(overall) 2/5(personal) Not really blaming the author as I'm in that phase where I can't really enjoy any slow paced story. And this story is as slow as it gets. Wouldn't be surprised if only the childhood arc took 50+ chapters. So, this one will be a downvote from me. Not necessarily bad but not to my taste. Character Design: 4/5 At times I felt like I gave too much of a score here but then again some characters are really fleshed out. This one is really all over the place tbh. Some characters are totally monochromatic while others are totally defined with all dynamics. Then again it's only 20 chapters so far. Could change in future. Updating Stability: As I read the whole 20 chaps in one go, I honestly am not informed well enough to comment on the updating Stability. But tbh I never really had any problem with anyone's updating schedule, so long the story remains interesting. So a 5/5 from me World Background: 4/5 While teenager me would've ranked "ASOIAF" as 10/5, unfortunately the adult me disagrees. My experience has already been soured with the catastrophe of the "Last Season" of GOT. Since there hasn't been much of a world building to this point, I'm assuming it to follow the original, Hence 4/5 Overall it's a good fanfic to pass time. One where I can guarantee that you aren't gonna lose your braincell in every second sentence or shiver with cringe with every dialogue. This is no masterpiece by any means. Not yet at least. But there isn't anything fundamentally wrong with it, aside from slow pace. But that's my personal gripe. So I'd implore everyone to give it a try at least.

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