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2023-05-08 00:48

Warning! Although this is a great fanfic, it's a pure slice-of-life fanfic with cute moments and all that good stuff but don't read it expecting anything to happen that is plot relevant I mean none!

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Writing Quality: 5/5 This is one of the most decent ones in this platform in terms of writing. The structure is well thought out without much noise. Never felt too cramped. Story Development: 3.5/5(overall) 2/5(personal) Not really blaming the author as I'm in that phase where I can't really enjoy any slow paced story. And this story is as slow as it gets. Wouldn't be surprised if only the childhood arc took 50+ chapters. So, this one will be a downvote from me. Not necessarily bad but not to my taste. Character Design: 4/5 At times I felt like I gave too much of a score here but then again some characters are really fleshed out. This one is really all over the place tbh. Some characters are totally monochromatic while others are totally defined with all dynamics. Then again it's only 20 chapters so far. Could change in future. Updating Stability: As I read the whole 20 chaps in one go, I honestly am not informed well enough to comment on the updating Stability. But tbh I never really had any problem with anyone's updating schedule, so long the story remains interesting. So a 5/5 from me World Background: 4/5 While teenager me would've ranked "ASOIAF" as 10/5, unfortunately the adult me disagrees. My experience has already been soured with the catastrophe of the "Last Season" of GOT. Since there hasn't been much of a world building to this point, I'm assuming it to follow the original, Hence 4/5 Overall it's a good fanfic to pass time. One where I can guarantee that you aren't gonna lose your braincell in every second sentence or shiver with cringe with every dialogue. This is no masterpiece by any means. Not yet at least. But there isn't anything fundamentally wrong with it, aside from slow pace. But that's my personal gripe. So I'd implore everyone to give it a try at least.

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