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Wts the point of the chapter if he's not winning anything could said he didn't win or simply Mention the jokes in an article...could've use this chapter to either develop a relationship with someone...female or hv him delop more music or some book or sumthin
Thoughts it's an interesting idea. The grammar is great. The presentation of the status in most of the chapters is awesome. Problems, first Idk If ur waiting to make the connection or not but the system choice for a rapper for the Mc whn the only connection to rap for him is jail time and where he lived. There seem to be no history there of a young someone who's trying but don't hv a break or something thts rooted in rap hence why the system choose him and also a rap system. Also the Mc seem to not be interested in finding this out also and another thing which is forgotten or maybe it turn into the butler, the system is sentient like n the Mc is just chill with that WHY also that aspect of the system is not explore after tht. Another thing is since the system cn create a human per say and money and also a house with equipments, it begs the question is this magic or mechanical because again this doesn't seem to bother the Mc 1 bit like how's this happening. Also I'm curious why hv the Mc use a label whn theres SoundCloud or Spotify to grow ...Maybe sing in the streets or at those pop up bars with a little crowd to build a following.
Im one of the ORIGINAL readers that read this novel from the start chapter 1 up to chapter 214, i stopped reading to stock up chapter months ago this novel was amazing the mc was great the story / plot is good and his interaction and romance with his harem was my favorite. But now after returning after months seeing how this Amazing novel i loved in the past turned into an Absolute chaotic MESS it really leaves me saddened, My beloved novel is not what i once LOVED. Like how victor stealed his mother From his Respectable father. NTR/C*CKED Im gonna stop reading at chapter 214 and leave this novel at a Good Memories instead of Dirtying this Beloved Novel by reading more chapters ahead