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MonthAuthor2yr
2022-03-24 13:09

So, Yes i did just give my own fic a 5 star. The story follows the path of the mc from before cannon. All the way back when the game, YGGDRASIL first began. Me as the author and also a reader, i along with everyone else hate a idiotic Mc so i made or atleast attempted to make a Mc who knows and has a plan for almost everything he does. Unlike Ainz, he actually has a plan. Aslo the Mc personality is not innocent nor Is he kind or nice, at least not to strangers. He does what he thinks would achieve his goals regardless or its morality. He can be manipulative, and evil as well as Honest and loyal. I use the novel/Anime/Webnovel for this fic. I also try my best to descibe why things happen as i know if i was the reader i would Also want to certain things but i dont info dump. I have a plan for this Fic and several things are already blueprinted in my mind so most things i will not be changing regardless of what readers suggest however, i am open to certain ideas so feel free to drop your thoughts in the comments. I Have an idea that i belive is orginal as i have not seen it put into an Overlord Fic but i have not read every Overlord fic out there so i may be wrong. I will not say yet since its not implimented yet and i dont want to spoil. If you find yourself interested then just give it a try. You may like it Or love it.

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JerryI
JerryILv2

You are the best

Oji_san_ecchi
Oji_san_ecchiLv4

oh yeah

Ryofu
RyofuLv11

#NoRomane, #NoHarem or #Harem?

Month
MonthAuthor

Possibly romance, dunno about harem. But anything is possible honestly. I wont say yes or no bc idk yet.

Ryofu:#NoRomane, #NoHarem or #Harem?
Dazai_Osamu_2088
Dazai_Osamu_2088Lv1

Harem👍👍👍👍👍

Month:Possibly romance, dunno about harem. But anything is possible honestly. I wont say yes or no bc idk yet.
PeterGriffith
PeterGriffithLv4

Desperate normies.

Dazai_Osamu_2088:Harem👍👍👍👍👍
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Dazai_Osamu_2088
Dazai_Osamu_2088Lv1

PeterGriffith:Desperate normies.
NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv14

pls harem because it is logical. Why? because MC becomes powerful, rich ect.... also new world different common sense. I mean look at our past, history many powerful people who were generally men had many women an it was ok, only when the church came about the western countries went to one women marriage. Still their are countries that allow multi wives. Plus we all know people can cheat on each whether man or women.

KIING
KIINGLv14

Why did you drop this? It is really good.

InsertaGoodName
InsertaGoodNameLv11

NowGoWithTheFlow:pls harem because it is logical. Why? because MC becomes powerful, rich ect.... also new world different common sense. I mean look at our past, history many powerful people who were generally men had many women an it was ok, only when the church came about the western countries went to one women marriage. Still their are countries that allow multi wives. Plus we all know people can cheat on each whether man or women.
Zerus
ZerusLv15

It's interesting but it doesn't make sense how the MC changes races in the beginning. dying with level 0 means that the necessary levels to revive are missing so the character in YGGDRASIL actually had to be deleted.

Month
MonthAuthor

Like I said in the synopsis, this is a AU. Most of the things will be within overlord borders, but not everything will be complete fact. You should read it with an open mind.

Zerus:It's interesting but it doesn't make sense how the MC changes races in the beginning. dying with level 0 means that the necessary levels to revive are missing so the character in YGGDRASIL actually had to be deleted.
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

This fic is Great. I really recomend you to post 3-4 chapters a week on this.

Month
MonthAuthor

Cant, I write another, more serious, novel

GrandVoid:This fic is Great. I really recomend you to post 3-4 chapters a week on this.
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

No problem

Month:Cant, I write another, more serious, novel
Lilbroomstick9
Lilbroomstick9Lv4

How is that logical

NowGoWithTheFlow:pls harem because it is logical. Why? because MC becomes powerful, rich ect.... also new world different common sense. I mean look at our past, history many powerful people who were generally men had many women an it was ok, only when the church came about the western countries went to one women marriage. Still their are countries that allow multi wives. Plus we all know people can cheat on each whether man or women.
Lilbroomstick9
Lilbroomstick9Lv4

How is that logical

NowGoWithTheFlow:pls harem because it is logical. Why? because MC becomes powerful, rich ect.... also new world different common sense. I mean look at our past, history many powerful people who were generally men had many women an it was ok, only when the church came about the western countries went to one women marriage. Still their are countries that allow multi wives. Plus we all know people can cheat on each whether man or women.
NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv14

Um.... I just explained it. If you can't understand my previous comment then it's a lost cause for you. Maybe your joking around.

Lilbroomstick9:How is that logical
Scarlett_reaper
Scarlett_reaperLv4

Will you get back to writing this story any time soon

Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv14

Did you perma drop?

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Delusion10
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ReviewOverseer
ReviewOverseerLv4

Alright, let me see if I can spit out a good review, since most recent ones are just begging the author to return. Summary and Star Ratings are at the bottom if you just wanna skip the explanations. Okay let's start things off. Writing Quality, it's great, simple as that. The author writes pretty amazingly and it really draws you in, every chapter is a real treat. Story development is also pretty solid, it moves forward at a decent pace, with it not being like some Overlord novels that have the MC go from lvl 1 to 100 in half a chapter. In this novel you can actually see him grow in power and gain items, skills, and jobs. Character design is a bit iffy in my opinion. The MC has a general personality, and acts just about how you'd expect him to. But that's kinda it, he's not super memorable and it's easy to forget things about him. Updating Stability, boy oh boy. This novel is super bad with stability. From what I remember it used to be super consistent in its updates, problem is that the author recently vanished for several months with no heads up. Now the author has started a second, unique novel, If I were you I wouldn't really get too attatched, most authors that start their own novels usually tend to drop their fanfic novels to focus on their unique one. World background is easy, it's Overlord, meaning it's great. Author expands on Yggdrasil more than most novels, which is nice. Nothing much more to say than that. Summary time. Writing quality is great, pretty consistent in quality too, little to no errors. Story development is solid, it's not too fast or too slow usually. Character design is okay, MC is kinda forgettable, but generally leaves an okay impression. Updating Stability is bad, don't get your hopes up. World background is great, as almost all Overlord novels are. Star Ratings. Writing Quality: 4.5/5 Story Development: 3.8/5 Character Design: 2.8/5 Updating Stability: 0.5/5 World Background: 4.5/5 Total Star Review: 3.7/5 I'd recommend giving it a read, but if the author goes MIA again, don't be too surprised. It's a good novel all things considered though.

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