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  • JerryI
    JerryI3d
    Commented

    Why is there no time pass?

    Ch 15 Chapter 13 Time skip
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    Journey Starts from SAO
    Anime & Comics · LORD_INDRATH
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  • JerryI
    JerryI3d
    Posted

    The story is shit, an antihero was planned, or perhaps an anti-villain, but it turned out shit, the hero was tortured, he ran away, and Satoru began to preach to him that he was a fucking cockerel and a bespectacled guy and not a kid at all, the hero got into it and the author's cuckoo flew off.

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    Marvel: Group Chat
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  • JerryI
    JerryI3d
    Commented

    Stupid conversation, Rudra was clearly not himself when he escaped from the hydra base, it's not his fault that he couldn't save the children, why does the author raise it so much as if it was his fault, hydra would have cleaned up this base even if he hadn't blown it up, and he doesn't hate the heroes for the fact that they are his they didn't save him, I don't understand where it came from at all, now it doesn't make sense at all whether he loves heroes or not, they didn't save him and that's it, now he doesn't need help, he has power, and the fact that his origin is not heroic well, what can you do, as they say, oranges will not be born from aspen. There is no point in reproaching the hero for something that had nothing to do with him, a stupid conversation.

    Ch 10 10. Gojo vs Rudra (To become better)
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    Marvel: Group Chat
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  • JerryI
    JerryI4d
    Replied to Best_Of_the_Best

    Confession will not atone for his guilt, he killed them, and that's it, no confession will fix it, his confession is just a psychological trick to absolve himself of responsibility, although he could be a man and continue to do what he thinks is right, the guards are still too weak to fight with the Wiltrumites, so they are or are out no, it does not matter for this battle, what is more important is that he is wasting his time and now he will be a mutt of the government and no one will respect and trust him, this is a stupid step from whatever side you look at it, and this is a stupid court move.

    Ch 12 12: The Truth of Viltrum
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    Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)
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  • JerryI
    JerryI4d
    Replied to Best_Of_the_Best

    Confession will not atone for his guilt, he killed them, and that's it, no confession will fix it, his confession is just a psychological trick to absolve himself of responsibility, although he could be a man and continue to do what he thinks is right, the guards are still too weak to fight with the Wiltrumites, so they are or are out no, it does not matter for this battle, what is more important is that he is wasting his time and now he will be a mutt of the government and no one will respect and trust him, this is a stupid step from whatever side you look at it, and this is a stupid court move.

    Ch 12 12: The Truth of Viltrum
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    Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)
    Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
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  • JerryI
    JerryI4d
    Replied to Best_Of_the_Best

    He could help save the earth from Vitrum and without admitting, he still has all the knowledge about those who can defeat the Wiltrumites.

    Ch 12 12: The Truth of Viltrum
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    Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)
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  • JerryI
    JerryI4d
    Commented

    Just write.

    Ch 14 ⚠️⚠️Attention ⚠️⚠️
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  • JerryI
    JerryI4d
    Replied to JerryI

    They cleaned up in the last chapter, but they didn't do anything in this one.

    Ch 12 My Child Is So Cute!
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    Danmachi: I'm Getting Skills In The Dungeon!
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  • JerryI
    JerryI4d
    Commented

    Author, I don't want to rush you or anything like that, but literally nothing has happened in the entire chapter, since the last chapter, they've both cleaned up and that's it.

    Ch 12 My Child Is So Cute!
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    Danmachi: I'm Getting Skills In The Dungeon!
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  • JerryI
    JerryI4d
    Commented

    It's easier than simple, just grab him by the neck until he loses consciousness and then take away the seal, to be honest, with a large difference in strength, it doesn't matter whether the opponent sees the future or not.

    Ch 47 Chapter 47 : Internship 2
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    MHA : Hero Time
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  • JerryI
    JerryI4d
    Commented

    To be honest, the last few chapters are very short and about nothing.

    Ch 13 Chapter 12 Damn Beta players
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  • JerryI
    JerryI6d
    Commented

    The author, the loss of consciousness is due to a concussion, and this is brain damage, so it makes no sense to say that he did not harm them.

    Ch 8 Worthless.
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    MHA: Kibutsuji
    Anime & Comics · TheFanBoy
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  • JerryI
    JerryI6d
    Commented

    The first half of the chapters are a month old and the second is completely new, the story is good, but I think it would be better to release chapters gradually, fueling interest, than all at once.

    Ch 14 Guilt is like a Sword at My Neck
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    I am Ironman
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  • JerryI
    JerryI6d
    Commented

    I can give you some advice, just don't quit and keep writing, that's the most important advice.

    Ch 45 Chapter 45 : Enough Daring For Today
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  • JerryI
    JerryI8d
    Replied to JerryI

    There is also an option to wish for a super mind in order to reproduce any superpower yourself, but to be realistic, how much effort and material and mental resources are needed for this, and I also do not remember a single person or character who would say that he is happy to be the smartest.

    Ch 14 Demon Slayer Volume 2 Reaction
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    Entertainment System
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  • JerryI
    JerryI9d
    Replied to JerryI

    As for the first two, it's just a banal power that you always have in your hands. The priority of the first and second may vary depending on what will have greater potential after execution. For example, you can get the powers of superman, but you will be at the level of a Homelander, but if you made a wish for telekinesis, you could have the potential of Tatsumaki, or vice versa, if you make a wish for telekinesis, you can move cars at most, and if you make a wish to become strong, you will be strong as a Homelander, or it may be more profitable to make a wish for some more specialized and narrowly focused kinesis, for example magnetism is like that of Magneto and this will increase the potential power of the force. Power is more important than just an entertainment system, but if it's some really pathetic rob or you don't have enough karma, for example, you can just make up an autonomous bunker in which you will have a medical capsule that can treat you and prolong your life, virtual reality like in SAO and AI that will generate any world you want.

    Ch 14 Demon Slayer Volume 2 Reaction
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  • JerryI
    JerryI9d
    Commented

    By the way, such an "entertainment system" is in third place on my list of Rob's priority desires. Right after Superman's abilities and telekinesis. Because it allows you to be sure that no matter what in the other world there will be normal entertainment familiar to you, and it is also a piece of nostalgia from your native world.

    Ch 14 Demon Slayer Volume 2 Reaction
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  • JerryI
    JerryI9d
    Replied to UnrelatableAuthor

    Will the creation of games play a role in this work? Or the story will be centered around anime and manga.

    Ch 1 Entertainment System
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  • JerryI
    JerryI9d
    Commented

    Tell me a fanfiction with a similar system.

    Ch 14 Demon Slayer Volume 2 Reaction
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  • JerryI
    JerryI9d
    Commented

    Why is the movie coming after the anime? Creating anime is more difficult in my opinion. While you can even just take a movie on your phone.

    Ch 1 Entertainment System
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