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Fuehrer
FuehrerLv32yr
2022-03-07 21:57

I only just have 4 hope, in this story Momonga doesn't become the leader of Ainz Ooal Gown/Mc becomes the leader, Albedo becomes Waifu's Mc, this story doesn't stop at the beginning or the midway, and most importantly, update quickly because this story has a very good start. so I can't wait for new chap..

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VoteRat
VoteRatLv4

there is not even a romance tag, so how is Albedo going to become mcs waifu?

Fuehrer
FuehrerLv3

I only just hope🙂

VoteRat:there is not even a romance tag, so how is Albedo going to become mcs waifu?
VoteRat
VoteRatLv4

ya no, author don't listen to this dunce

Fuehrer:I only just hope🙂
aSleepyPenguin
aSleepyPenguinLv5

Can we keep it no romance… 😐👍

Fanfic_Lovers
Fanfic_LoversLv3

Harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem

VoteRat:ya no, author don't listen to this dunce
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Fanfic_Lovers:Harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem
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