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2022-03-25 05:38

Probably one of the more interesting and unique Overlord fanfictions being posted (except mine muahahaha!) Anyways, back to the topic. The story has plenty of potential and can go a multitude of ways from how the mc is setup. For example, Doyle's relationship with Luci☆Fer, a future Nazarick member. He can either join, be allies or mortal enemies with Ainz Ooal Gown. Any option has great potential that can be exploited. The world building as of now is great and I hope it continues as Doyle is transported to the new world. Maybe he transports with nazarick or on the other side of the continent. He'll, maybe Doyle could be transported in the past or future. The possibilities are endless. As Doyle's is still in YGGDRASIL, I do hope that there will be future character interactions. Examples include possibly meeting Surshana or the Greed Kings during his quest to getting stronger. Maybe these interactions can alter history in the new world. For example, helping Surshana in a raid might put Doyle in the Theocracy's sacred books as a friend of the God's. Overall, a great read. However, I do wish the author posts more often xD. (I'm also glad my book helped inspire yours. My next chapter will probably release Sunday - Monday xD)

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Cant wait for the next chapter <3

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Alright, let me see if I can spit out a good review, since most recent ones are just begging the author to return. Summary and Star Ratings are at the bottom if you just wanna skip the explanations. Okay let's start things off. Writing Quality, it's great, simple as that. The author writes pretty amazingly and it really draws you in, every chapter is a real treat. Story development is also pretty solid, it moves forward at a decent pace, with it not being like some Overlord novels that have the MC go from lvl 1 to 100 in half a chapter. In this novel you can actually see him grow in power and gain items, skills, and jobs. Character design is a bit iffy in my opinion. The MC has a general personality, and acts just about how you'd expect him to. But that's kinda it, he's not super memorable and it's easy to forget things about him. Updating Stability, boy oh boy. This novel is super bad with stability. From what I remember it used to be super consistent in its updates, problem is that the author recently vanished for several months with no heads up. Now the author has started a second, unique novel, If I were you I wouldn't really get too attatched, most authors that start their own novels usually tend to drop their fanfic novels to focus on their unique one. World background is easy, it's Overlord, meaning it's great. Author expands on Yggdrasil more than most novels, which is nice. Nothing much more to say than that. Summary time. Writing quality is great, pretty consistent in quality too, little to no errors. Story development is solid, it's not too fast or too slow usually. Character design is okay, MC is kinda forgettable, but generally leaves an okay impression. Updating Stability is bad, don't get your hopes up. World background is great, as almost all Overlord novels are. Star Ratings. Writing Quality: 4.5/5 Story Development: 3.8/5 Character Design: 2.8/5 Updating Stability: 0.5/5 World Background: 4.5/5 Total Star Review: 3.7/5 I'd recommend giving it a read, but if the author goes MIA again, don't be too surprised. It's a good novel all things considered though.

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