So, Yes i did just give my own fic a 5 star. The story follows the path of the mc from before cannon. All the way back when the game, YGGDRASIL first began. Me as the author and also a reader, i along with everyone else hate a idiotic Mc so i made or atleast attempted to make a Mc who knows and has a plan for almost everything he does. Unlike Ainz, he actually has a plan. Aslo the Mc personality is not innocent nor Is he kind or nice, at least not to strangers. He does what he thinks would achieve his goals regardless or its morality. He can be manipulative, and evil as well as Honest and loyal. I use the novel/Anime/Webnovel for this fic. I also try my best to descibe why things happen as i know if i was the reader i would Also want to certain things but i dont info dump. I have a plan for this Fic and several things are already blueprinted in my mind so most things i will not be changing regardless of what readers suggest however, i am open to certain ideas so feel free to drop your thoughts in the comments. I Have an idea that i belive is orginal as i have not seen it put into an Overlord Fic but i have not read every Overlord fic out there so i may be wrong. I will not say yet since its not implimented yet and i dont want to spoil. If you find yourself interested then just give it a try. You may like it Or love it.

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Amazing Take on Overlord adding a New Race is also fun being a Ghost is super OP and its Just one of the many maybe Future OP abilities of the MC i am already looking Forward to more 10/10 would recommend.

I only just have 4 hope, in this story Momonga doesn't become the leader of Ainz Ooal Gown/Mc becomes the leader, Albedo becomes Waifu's Mc, this story doesn't stop at the beginning or the midway, and most importantly, update quickly because this story has a very good start. so I can't wait for new chap..

Today we're making author lemonade The recipe is easy, there's no need to be afraid just Fill a cup with water, now we're well on our way to Make something as glorious as author lemonade The last thing that we need's a heart and soul So take your trusty knife and carve a decent-size hole in your chest Take what is needed and we'll go for the gold by Squeezing out the juice contained within the heart and soul

Alright, let me see if I can spit out a good review, since most recent ones are just begging the author to return. Summary and Star Ratings are at the bottom if you just wanna skip the explanations. Okay let's start things off. Writing Quality, it's great, simple as that. The author writes pretty amazingly and it really draws you in, every chapter is a real treat. Story development is also pretty solid, it moves forward at a decent pace, with it not being like some Overlord novels that have the MC go from lvl 1 to 100 in half a chapter. In this novel you can actually see him grow in power and gain items, skills, and jobs. Character design is a bit iffy in my opinion. The MC has a general personality, and acts just about how you'd expect him to. But that's kinda it, he's not super memorable and it's easy to forget things about him. Updating Stability, boy oh boy. This novel is super bad with stability. From what I remember it used to be super consistent in its updates, problem is that the author recently vanished for several months with no heads up. Now the author has started a second, unique novel, If I were you I wouldn't really get too attatched, most authors that start their own novels usually tend to drop their fanfic novels to focus on their unique one. World background is easy, it's Overlord, meaning it's great. Author expands on Yggdrasil more than most novels, which is nice. Nothing much more to say than that. Summary time. Writing quality is great, pretty consistent in quality too, little to no errors. Story development is solid, it's not too fast or too slow usually. Character design is okay, MC is kinda forgettable, but generally leaves an okay impression. Updating Stability is bad, don't get your hopes up. World background is great, as almost all Overlord novels are. Star Ratings. Writing Quality: 4.5/5 Story Development: 3.8/5 Character Design: 2.8/5 Updating Stability: 0.5/5 World Background: 4.5/5 Total Star Review: 3.7/5 I'd recommend giving it a read, but if the author goes MIA again, don't be too surprised. It's a good novel all things considered though.

I like it until the recent update. the only thing that I must mention that author should use his own system measurement instead of the canon , mc made 500 dmg and the enemy not death is shocking for me. then make it to your own number so I can imagine how big the damage mc dealt to his enemy. as you say "100 hp is not mean 100 it can mean 200, or 1000 or whatever". it's YOUR fanfic , your OWN fulfilment story , YOUR OWN fantasies. but made it clear. if you not gonna explain why bother release it to public if it not meant to be understood by readers .

This is an amazing fan-fic, I hope it's continued. Also, in this case a harem is strongly advised against by me, at the least don't make it the focus of the story and don't make the members clingy and want attention every second. I still strongly advise against it. For Wholesomeness! -Wholesome Sect

I read that npc story you recommended and he’s on hiatus now because he’s got school and now I have no more chapters to read and now I’m sad. Realistic depiction of how I feel —> :( Also your story is very good