great story I just wish I knew if it is harem. he has met and interacted with a total of maybe 3 guys. I don't particularly care either way but it is odd because with this focus it almost seems really weird when you have 9 different girls all around with some having flirty and cheap characteristics. then all of a sudden he is drawn to one and just flat out mentions the others aren't important to him, which is fine but then why make them all the same temperament and introduce them the exact same way. I am terrible at names anyway so I can't remember what one she was much less what she's done and can do. I guess the biggest flaw i have found is that the characters grow but they all grow the same . I can hardly tell the difference from each character which either stems from inexperience from either me or the author or is used to establish a harem. honestly one of the few where I would specifically recommend harem due to the corner that you have written yourself into with the at least 5 separate women that are all stingy and half are flirty and the rest are just blunt. regardless keep up the good work hope you can find a good ground and escape the corner.

I think it's a very unique take on the system genre, it's actually great to see a novel where the mc is not ridiculously overpowered with a system straight off the bat which in turn helps set the premise for these big built up challenges and battles that the mc has during the course of the novel. There is some grammatical errors but you can for the most part understand what the author means when reading so it's not to difficult to grasp. Overall I believe this novel is worth the read so far.

these reviews are after reading the novel after 1400 quick summarygood- world building, action scenes, story development bad- romance, character developments, plot developments i have binged the novel up at these point. it has its scene that grabs ones attention and those that make you lose in the story. many parts in the story where great developments are made feel left behind to come around to again. the pacing feels rushed not full developing character stories or plots. but the story has really big moments where the story has great developments finally putting pieces together to make one enjoyable story. as well as scenes that make u want to know what's going to happen next to continue reading.

Welcome to my novel! I always wanted to give a mix about apocalypse and reincarnation. Despite it's not literally reincarnation and it's like time travel, but both are the same. Anyway, I have already stacked almost 70 chapters, with each spanning around 2k words. So buckle up and be ready for a rollercoaster ride. Warning: It's addicting, so read with your own discretion.

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Well, to make it short; not my Cup of Tea. the Mc seems insanly Stupid even thought the Author portrayed him as bright and intelligent...he isn't. Chapter 4 already anf he seems like your average joe.... Story...meh, pretty boring. seems like that's everything there is to say...bye

How is the Novel? It's Average, It's looks like something made after reading omniscient reader,blood warlock. The plot is so forced that it is full of loopholes and too much context Is added in a short amount of chapters,The story is great and has a lot of potential but idk it feels too rushed and lacks anything worth remembering,The beginning of the plot was great and first 50 chapters were unique and rlly good imo and it was all great until the angels full on decided to go on war with him,It's not like I'm against the idea where the Mc fights with the angels... it's a really exciting part but the thing is it becomes quite repetitive where the angels become dumb af who just shoot the star weapon thing repetitively,I lost a lot of braincells after this stuff and the plot becomes even more ridiculous where the Mc falls in love with Karoline,Idk what happened and when they became close enough to get into a relationship... Too forced imo and rushed af. It pains me to say this but I have lost hope in this novel which could have been executed in a better way 😔

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If I were to choose one word to describe this novel, I’d described it as a mess. I’m at chapter 180 and it’s like the author doesn’t even remember what he wrote in other chapters. The power balance makes no sense and contradicts itself he mixes up character’s abilities etc its an absolute mess as of chapter 180 not worth 20 or so coins per chapter