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Hikki_786
Hikki_786Lv132yr
2022-08-13 08:49

How is the Novel? It's Average, It's looks like something made after reading omniscient reader,blood warlock. The plot is so forced that it is full of loopholes and too much context Is added in a short amount of chapters,The story is great and has a lot of potential but idk it feels too rushed and lacks anything worth remembering,The beginning of the plot was great and first 50 chapters were unique and rlly good imo and it was all great until the angels full on decided to go on war with him,It's not like I'm against the idea where the Mc fights with the angels... it's a really exciting part but the thing is it becomes quite repetitive where the angels become dumb af who just shoot the star weapon thing repetitively,I lost a lot of braincells after this stuff and the plot becomes even more ridiculous where the Mc falls in love with Karoline,Idk what happened and when they became close enough to get into a relationship... Too forced imo and rushed af. It pains me to say this but I have lost hope in this novel which could have been executed in a better way 😔

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Legendary_Gear5
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Yes it’s romance is the worst I’ve ever read. 150 chapters in now and author just pawned off all the women fawning over mc on other dudes as soon as they pop up. Literally in the same chapter the romance between them start, ya know just 3 seconds ago they didn’t even know each other exist. It’s painful to read.

Simple_Scholar
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I'm surprised by how many good reviews this book has, as an author this is painful to read

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