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GuanamLv142yr
2022-11-28 08:12

If I were to choose one word to describe this novel, I’d described it as a mess. I’m at chapter 180 and it’s like the author doesn’t even remember what he wrote in other chapters. The power balance makes no sense and contradicts itself he mixes up character’s abilities etc its an absolute mess as of chapter 180 not worth 20 or so coins per chapter

I Only Wanted A Class In The Apocalypse

ranmaro
3.8
1796 Chs

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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxLv14

"I invite you to review my story. Your words have made me feel like you can offer my story a positive step forward. I'm currently 72 chapters in, and it's a slow-burn narrative.13 chapters a week. Each Arc consists of about 7-10 chapters and features high climax points, along with a unique Spirit system. However, as a poor writer, I can't afford to have an editor review my work. If you ever find the time to read a new story, I would love to have your eyes on my work. ❤️ Thanks!" Also it's a free story so just plusses if you enjoy it

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iSteppedOnCheese
iSteppedOnCheeseLv2

Try reading my novel Merciless King Replacement. You wont be disappointed

1yr
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Goodzillla
GoodzilllaLv15

great story I just wish I knew if it is harem. he has met and interacted with a total of maybe 3 guys. I don't particularly care either way but it is odd because with this focus it almost seems really weird when you have 9 different girls all around with some having flirty and cheap characteristics. then all of a sudden he is drawn to one and just flat out mentions the others aren't important to him, which is fine but then why make them all the same temperament and introduce them the exact same way. I am terrible at names anyway so I can't remember what one she was much less what she's done and can do. I guess the biggest flaw i have found is that the characters grow but they all grow the same . I can hardly tell the difference from each character which either stems from inexperience from either me or the author or is used to establish a harem. honestly one of the few where I would specifically recommend harem due to the corner that you have written yourself into with the at least 5 separate women that are all stingy and half are flirty and the rest are just blunt. regardless keep up the good work hope you can find a good ground and escape the corner.

3yr

Trevor_Kapeen
Trevor_KapeenLv15

I think it's a very unique take on the system genre, it's actually great to see a novel where the mc is not ridiculously overpowered with a system straight off the bat which in turn helps set the premise for these big built up challenges and battles that the mc has during the course of the novel. There is some grammatical errors but you can for the most part understand what the author means when reading so it's not to difficult to grasp. Overall I believe this novel is worth the read so far.

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VanhellsingARC
VanhellsingARCLv15

these reviews are after reading the novel after 1400 quick summarygood- world building, action scenes, story development bad- romance, character developments, plot developments i have binged the novel up at these point. it has its scene that grabs ones attention and those that make you lose in the story. many parts in the story where great developments are made feel left behind to come around to again. the pacing feels rushed not full developing character stories or plots. but the story has really big moments where the story has great developments finally putting pieces together to make one enjoyable story. as well as scenes that make u want to know what's going to happen next to continue reading.

1yr
ranmaro
ranmaroAuthor

Welcome to my novel! I always wanted to give a mix about apocalypse and reincarnation. Despite it's not literally reincarnation and it's like time travel, but both are the same. Anyway, I have already stacked almost 70 chapters, with each spanning around 2k words. So buckle up and be ready for a rollercoaster ride. Warning: It's addicting, so read with your own discretion.

3yr
Indescency
IndescencyLv15

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

Well, to make it short; not my Cup of Tea. the Mc seems insanly Stupid even thought the Author portrayed him as bright and intelligent...he isn't. Chapter 4 already anf he seems like your average joe.... Story...meh, pretty boring. seems like that's everything there is to say...bye

2yr
Hikki_786
Hikki_786Lv13

How is the Novel? It's Average, It's looks like something made after reading omniscient reader,blood warlock. The plot is so forced that it is full of loopholes and too much context Is added in a short amount of chapters,The story is great and has a lot of potential but idk it feels too rushed and lacks anything worth remembering,The beginning of the plot was great and first 50 chapters were unique and rlly good imo and it was all great until the angels full on decided to go on war with him,It's not like I'm against the idea where the Mc fights with the angels... it's a really exciting part but the thing is it becomes quite repetitive where the angels become dumb af who just shoot the star weapon thing repetitively,I lost a lot of braincells after this stuff and the plot becomes even more ridiculous where the Mc falls in love with Karoline,Idk what happened and when they became close enough to get into a relationship... Too forced imo and rushed af. It pains me to say this but I have lost hope in this novel which could have been executed in a better way 😔

2yr
loveleterisready
loveleterisreadyLv10

The cover looks cool. The cover looks cool. The cover looks cool. The cover looks cool. The cover looks cool. The cover looks cool. The cover looks cool. The cover looks cool. The cover looks cool.

3yr
Melshan
MelshanLv7

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2yr
WSmith17
WSmith17Lv15

Gave up before chapter 100. story went way too fast. world is completely unbalanced with the race that is supposed to be guiding humanity doing everything it can to wipe us out with absolutely no repercussions regardless of their actions. MC became super rich and killed everyone regardless of strength. I think it was before chapter 50 that he killed a dozen royal dragons. Every time the MC wins a battle the bad guys just up the score without any limitations but the MC just keeps winning. To top all of that off the chapters are about twice as expensive as other books. might not seem like much at 36 cents a chapter, but definitely not worth it for the quality of the book.

2yr
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