great story I just wish I knew if it is harem. he has met and interacted with a total of maybe 3 guys. I don't particularly care either way but it is odd because with this focus it almost seems really weird when you have 9 different girls all around with some having flirty and cheap characteristics. then all of a sudden he is drawn to one and just flat out mentions the others aren't important to him, which is fine but then why make them all the same temperament and introduce them the exact same way. I am terrible at names anyway so I can't remember what one she was much less what she's done and can do. I guess the biggest flaw i have found is that the characters grow but they all grow the same . I can hardly tell the difference from each character which either stems from inexperience from either me or the author or is used to establish a harem. honestly one of the few where I would specifically recommend harem due to the corner that you have written yourself into with the at least 5 separate women that are all stingy and half are flirty and the rest are just blunt. regardless keep up the good work hope you can find a good ground and escape the corner.
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LIKEWell, at this point I imagine that you either dropped this novel or is way ahead of me. I'm currently at ch 147 (very behind) and from what I see it appears that after he hooked up with Kat-something (daughter of the ex-president) all the other girls suddenly stopped showing the intention/interest of dating him Tbh, the fact that the author spent 30 chapters calling his warriors as "My little boys" and still calling his chariot as "My little girl" gives me very weird vibes...
Modes of transport like boats and cars are normally personified as female so it does make sense
Mzeeddz:Well, at this point I imagine that you either dropped this novel or is way ahead of me. I'm currently at ch 147 (very behind) and from what I see it appears that after he hooked up with Kat-something (daughter of the ex-president) all the other girls suddenly stopped showing the intention/interest of dating him Tbh, the fact that the author spent 30 chapters calling his warriors as "My little boys" and still calling his chariot as "My little girl" gives me very weird vibes...
ya this dude is like I have to find my soul mate to lose my virginity, didn't realize actual men needed to find a soul mate or someone that moves their heart( ya sounds stupid but that's his logic in not hooking up with these girls) to find a girl se$ually attractive. but if author comes from a Asian country then I understand as in it makes sense.
And once the little boys put the sword into the little girl's wheels to stop said chariot from moving in the eventual escape scene? Terrible jokes and awkward feelings for sure...
Mzeeddz:Well, at this point I imagine that you either dropped this novel or is way ahead of me. I'm currently at ch 147 (very behind) and from what I see it appears that after he hooked up with Kat-something (daughter of the ex-president) all the other girls suddenly stopped showing the intention/interest of dating him Tbh, the fact that the author spent 30 chapters calling his warriors as "My little boys" and still calling his chariot as "My little girl" gives me very weird vibes...