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ok. that's it. i am done. he is stupid. the plot is stupid. this is unreadable.
Wow, what amazing reflexes, the King of soldiers who is alone in a room, has no reaction when someone starts talking next to him? It's a cheap motel room, so he's merely feet away. Before the second word is started he'd be looking. *I* would, and I am no king soldier. Yet this person gets 2 sentences out before he turns his head????
I know I am being picky, but if he is clenching the shattered glass of the orb in his fist, the blood is not dripping anywhere, it's oozing around the glass in his hand.
You say he underrated the story development but then give an example of how poorly it's done - Sally being shoved at him, and the bullying *is* idiotic. The whole idea of the school makes it sound like he came up with it as a solution, but later, there's a comment about how hard his parents tried to get him into the school. Events come out of the blue, reasons for things happening are contradictory, not explained, and the fantastic plot device of "I stumbled into it" are all examples of poor plot development.
He *is* special. He just isn't superior.
Yeah, "confess" is more fitting if he is in an Asian culture. Western style would be to ask her out. A proposal is specific to marriage or business.
Yeah, I have no clue. When it's the demon cland and the demon clan, I know they mean yao and mo, and have an inkling as to the difference. But security and security?? One is police and the other??
I assume it's yao and mo.
there was another option called "speed" and later he says he will stick with "min" so it seems it means agility.
Do you understand the English language? Slavery is wrong. Fictional stories may have wrong things in them - murder, torture, violence, slavery among them. Having those in the story does not mean they are condoned in real life by the author or those that enjoy reading them. The only reason I jumped in because your seeming lack of comprehension which I mistook as misunderstanding. My bad.