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Indescency
IndescencyLv152yr
2022-04-28 04:52

Unfortunately I am going to leave a negative review. The story has a lot of potential, but the pacing is insane. Within 24 hours, everyone he meets has adjusted to the apocalypse perfectly, seem to be seasoned veterans, the MC has multiple level 100 subordinates, is filthy rich, and the enemies are plotting ans reacting as if this has all happened over the course of months. Plus, everyone he meets seems eager to essentially sign a slave contract for very little logical reasons. I like OP MC’s, reincarnation, and such but this is all too much WAY WAY too quickly.

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ranmaro
ranmaroAuthor

I will take note of this when writing my next novel. Thanks for leaving good review with points I can work on and upgrade my writings in. Have a nice day!

ranmaro
ranmaroAuthor

May I know which chapter you stopped at?

Indescency
IndescencyLv15

I stopped at chapter 88. I think you have the potential to write an amazing story, and would love to read more of your future works as you develop as an author, but I have to call it quits on this one. I apologize if I came off as harsh or anything, I just wanted to give good feedback. Best of luck to you!

ranmaro:May I know which chapter you stopped at?
ranmaro
ranmaroAuthor

It's ok. I just planned it to be fast paced from the very beginning and depended upon the presence of many currencies in the novel so pushing so hard in one currency or couple won't do much problems in the general balance. But from your comment here I can tell I slightly overdid it to some degree so I'll learn and try to focus more on this aspect in my next novel. I like such reviews as I learn from them and advance my writing career. I know I'm not the best writer at all and just trying to upgrade and learn from my mistakes. So thx for that good review. See u later in my next novel I hope. Have a nice day.

Indescency:I stopped at chapter 88. I think you have the potential to write an amazing story, and would love to read more of your future works as you develop as an author, but I have to call it quits on this one. I apologize if I came off as harsh or anything, I just wanted to give good feedback. Best of luck to you!
Aman_Lakhuja
Aman_LakhujaLv13

there is no discord server ? ,i can't find it anywhere

ranmaro:It's ok. I just planned it to be fast paced from the very beginning and depended upon the presence of many currencies in the novel so pushing so hard in one currency or couple won't do much problems in the general balance. But from your comment here I can tell I slightly overdid it to some degree so I'll learn and try to focus more on this aspect in my next novel. I like such reviews as I learn from them and advance my writing career. I know I'm not the best writer at all and just trying to upgrade and learn from my mistakes. So thx for that good review. See u later in my next novel I hope. Have a nice day.
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