Item: Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
Rating: 1
Author: Kurdi123

Kurdi123Lv113yr

2021-12-03 23:53

Saving Masaki is a Brainless logic move... (Masaki is Ichigo's mom that was killed by a hollow as Ichigo was younger) And I almost had hope for your novel

Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system

Prognastat

4.5

134 Chs

Liked by 19 people

Replies17

AvaCeciliaGraceLv14

how is it a brainless move? Everyone who has finished bleach knows Ichigo has became one of the strongest existences and all the qualities to replace the Soul King? Wouldn't saving his mom put him in good standing with Ichigo and make it easier for them to work together when the wandenreich attacks?

3yr

Kurdi123Lv11

Aha but the Mc is not Ichigo in this novel..

AvaCeciliaGrace:how is it a brainless move? Everyone who has finished bleach knows Ichigo has became one of the strongest existences and all the qualities to replace the Soul King? Wouldn't saving his mom put him in good standing with Ichigo and make it easier for them to work together when the wandenreich attacks?

3yr

AvaCeciliaGraceLv14

ichigo still exists in this novel and the MC hasn't stopped his growth or suggested even being an antagonist to Ichigo at all. So ie still not brainless to save Ichigo's mom since it also gives him an in with Kisuke Urahara Aswell.

Kurdi123:Aha but the Mc is not Ichigo in this novel..

3yr

Kurdi123Lv11

You really are to much of a Ichigo fangirl that you still think that a Mc in a bleach fanfiction without a Ichigo as friend is brainless and weak...

AvaCeciliaGrace:ichigo still exists in this novel and the MC hasn't stopped his growth or suggested even being an antagonist to Ichigo at all. So ie still not brainless to save Ichigo's mom since it also gives him an in with Kisuke Urahara Aswell.

3yr

Kurdi123Lv11

And if the Author made it like this then it just means that he has no creativity anyways I stopped reading this

Kurdi123:You really are to much of a Ichigo fangirl that you still think that a Mc in a bleach fanfiction without a Ichigo as friend is brainless and weak...

3yr

AvaCeciliaGraceLv14

Kurdi123:And if the Author made it like this then it just means that he has no creativity anyways I stopped reading this

3yr

dozkiller07Lv4

u r an absolute joke. I don't understand why someone even need a reason to save a human life if he can do it without any consequences. but alas u thing being edgy and merciless is cool then it won't be for urs.

Kurdi123:And if the Author made it like this then it just means that he has no creativity anyways I stopped reading this

3yr

Cheese_curdlesLv4

Kurdi is everywhere and he likes being an idiot

AvaCeciliaGrace:

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3yr

DDaxLv5

he is a idiot for saying ff should not be about org mc... why do ppl like you go in fanfiction section i dont get it

Cheese_curdles:Kurdi is everywhere and he likes being an idiot

3yr

Fruitful_GamingLv13

This will sound edgy as heck but, let's say that someone is dying in front of me right? Do I save them, or do I leave them? And why would I choose what I chose? Personally, I leave em simply for the reason of I don't gain much from it other than the 'satisfaction' if there even is any. Simply my thoughts though, please reply I want to hear what you think.

dozkiller07:u r an absolute joke. I don't understand why someone even need a reason to save a human life if he can do it without any consequences. but alas u thing being edgy and merciless is cool then it won't be for urs.

3yr

dozkiller07Lv4

well.u and i obviously won't save them. infact both of us will be shoked to do anything and the first instinct will be to run away. I'm absolutely fine with it because nothing is in our control.we can't guarantee both our and the person we gonna save will be fine. trust me.im selfish enough to not endanger my life for a stranger. the thing I'm talking about is when I have strength and can be in control of situation then I will feel guilty to not do anything. that's all. it's like Spiderman said.if I have strength to stop it with a small effort from me and didn't do that then I feel disappointed myself.thats all. if u asking what I love in a mc.then it is a rational good mc. going all good and selfless is admirable but I don't know I'm good enough like that.at the same time I don't like evil who want everything to burn. the most I love is neutral.but they are too selfish. thats why I love a good rational mc. good enough to take effort to help others.selfish enough to care about himself.rational enough to act according to situation instead of blinded by emotion.

Fruitful_Gaming:This will sound edgy as heck but, let's say that someone is dying in front of me right? Do I save them, or do I leave them? And why would I choose what I chose? Personally, I leave em simply for the reason of I don't gain much from it other than the 'satisfaction' if there even is any. Simply my thoughts though, please reply I want to hear what you think.

3yr

XersolLv1

Bruh saving Masaki means that Ichigos father won’t get his powers back, and Yhwach would also notice the change with this Almighty

3yr

dozkiller07Lv4

about that.u need to read more chapters. he got his powers back. as for how? it's spoiler

Xersol:Bruh saving Masaki means that Ichigos father won’t get his powers back, and Yhwach would also notice the change with this Almighty

3yr

XersolLv1

That’s the thing, even if Isshin saved Masaki, and got his powers back, Yhwach is still there going to notice the change, which means he is going to possibly die

dozkiller07:about that.u need to read more chapters. he got his powers back. as for how? it's spoiler

3yr

dozkiller07Lv4

it's useless to argue about a fic that has been abandoned for a long time. if u read th 50 chapters completely then u can see how mc plans his moves. obviously the plan has a big plotarmour(author ability) protecting him. so read the chapters till end to tackle your defence

Xersol:That’s the thing, even if Isshin saved Masaki, and got his powers back, Yhwach is still there going to notice the change, which means he is going to possibly die

3yr

mowLv4

2yr

Jeremy_ClinthLv1

honestly, I agree

10mth

Other Reviews

_oinkchanLv5

Mc's character is perfect. Not too manipulative nor too goody shoes. I like his interactions with his family and Hollow species seems to have immense potential. In all this is a good fanfic even more because there are no good nowadays.

3yr

CharreosLv3

honestly, pretty frickin good the writing quality- I don't really have a master degree in English but I don't see any flaws so 5 stars updates- really good, getting updated a couple times a day 5 stars story development- the story develops really well there wasn't really any arcs so I cant say about the future but for now 5 stars character design- first of all mama mia those are some good characters the OC's are well done especially the MC they feel like how real people talk react and think world background- ...its bleach

3yr

InGloriousLv4

I usually don't write a review because they mostly get deleted but I still decided to drop a review for this fic... This fic really needs a review which pointed out it faults. I am trying to help you out as this is a good fanfic. If you ignore this or delete this, I won't mind. Writing Quality- 4 stars Your paragraphs are huge. Please don't write such huge paragraphs. It gets really annoying to read but aside that, everything is fine. Story Development- 3 stars There are is a lot of mess you have have made in the story but you still trying to force the plot to continue on its path. Character Design- 2 stars You main character is a controversy. I won't go into the mess about anti-hero. He said that he wanted to go unnoticed by Aizen and the goes to Hueco Mundo,that is Aizen's backyard. I understand that the system is hiding his presence so I will leave that aside. He said that he didn't want to change the timeline but he goes and saves Ichigo's mother. With Yhwach's broken ability known as Almighty, there is no way that he wouldn't notice that. Even if system helps to hide the woman, saving Ichigo's mom means that Isshin Kurosaki won't get back his powers. In the canon he only got back his Soul Reaper powers when his wife died. And there is also the fact that the MC killed Aizen's pet project to save Ichigo's mom. I bet the system can't hide that. So, you have already changed the plot so much that you simply can't continue with the same timeline. Updating Stanility- 5 stars World Background- 5 stars That's my review. As I said previously, I don't mind if you delete this but it will do you good if you consider the things I have just mentioned...

3yr

St_PatLv4

This fanfic is tagged wrong. This fanfic has no Anti hero development in story and the character of the MC is exactly opposite. If anyone wants to read this fanfic due to its ‘Anti-Hero’ tag, then don’t even bother to read it. I was attracted to this fanfic because of its Anti hero tag and it being Bleach fanfic which is rare, but i had to drop reading this fanfic because there is nothing Antihero in this fanfic. MC is too much of a ‘Good Boy’.

3yr

TandorisLv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr

EverythingonurmindLv4

its decent but there are useless and braindead decisions as well which doesn't make sense (my guess is that its a way of self insertion for author perhaps) so if you don't like useless decisions then I guess this ain't for you. peace ✌

3yr

eQzyLv1

Saving Ichigo's mother stupidly killed the desire to read. How is she better or worse than thousands and millions of other people? Because she's the mother of the anime's protagonist? Take such a risk, move to another city, follow the Ichigo family to save one person! I'm outraged! Written well, but here I go.

2yr

PrognastatAuthor

Shameless author self review. Just wanted to say this is my first attempt at a fanfic, hopefully you like it. If you have any tips or feedback feel free to let me know as I would love to improve my writing.

3yr

AstralekLv2

Definitely a waste of time. The protagonist is so rediculously arrogant and whiny at the beginning that it was unsufferable. There is a million ways he could have rapidly improved his strength, such as going to the wilderness to hunt animal souls or sneaking into prisons and eating the souls of death row prisoners. Instead, he decided to go 'save' Masaki by kidnapping her for 6 to 7 years under the guise that he killed her when he is literally a bug that can easily be crushed to death by any random mob. 2.8/5 stars.

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