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Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv43yr
2021-11-30 21:13

its decent but there are useless and braindead decisions as well which doesn't make sense (my guess is that its a way of self insertion for author perhaps) so if you don't like useless decisions then I guess this ain't for you. peace ✌

Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system

Prognastat
4.5
134 Chs

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MF_THE_BOTH
MF_THE_BOTHLv5

which one ?

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_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5

Mc's character is perfect. Not too manipulative nor too goody shoes. I like his interactions with his family and Hollow species seems to have immense potential. In all this is a good fanfic even more because there are no good nowadays.

3yr

Charreos
CharreosLv3

honestly, pretty frickin good the writing quality- I don't really have a master degree in English but I don't see any flaws so 5 stars updates- really good, getting updated a couple times a day 5 stars story development- the story develops really well there wasn't really any arcs so I cant say about the future but for now 5 stars character design- first of all mama mia those are some good characters the OC's are well done especially the MC they feel like how real people talk react and think world background- ...its bleach

3yr
InGlorious
InGloriousLv4

I usually don't write a review because they mostly get deleted but I still decided to drop a review for this fic... This fic really needs a review which pointed out it faults. I am trying to help you out as this is a good fanfic. If you ignore this or delete this, I won't mind. Writing Quality- 4 stars Your paragraphs are huge. Please don't write such huge paragraphs. It gets really annoying to read but aside that, everything is fine. Story Development- 3 stars There are is a lot of mess you have have made in the story but you still trying to force the plot to continue on its path. Character Design- 2 stars You main character is a controversy. I won't go into the mess about anti-hero. He said that he wanted to go unnoticed by Aizen and the goes to Hueco Mundo,that is Aizen's backyard. I understand that the system is hiding his presence so I will leave that aside. He said that he didn't want to change the timeline but he goes and saves Ichigo's mother. With Yhwach's broken ability known as Almighty, there is no way that he wouldn't notice that. Even if system helps to hide the woman, saving Ichigo's mom means that Isshin Kurosaki won't get back his powers. In the canon he only got back his Soul Reaper powers when his wife died. And there is also the fact that the MC killed Aizen's pet project to save Ichigo's mom. I bet the system can't hide that. So, you have already changed the plot so much that you simply can't continue with the same timeline. Updating Stanility- 5 stars World Background- 5 stars That's my review. As I said previously, I don't mind if you delete this but it will do you good if you consider the things I have just mentioned...

3yr
St_Pat
St_PatLv3

This fanfic is tagged wrong. This fanfic has no Anti hero development in story and the character of the MC is exactly opposite. If anyone wants to read this fanfic due to its ‘Anti-Hero’ tag, then don’t even bother to read it. I was attracted to this fanfic because of its Anti hero tag and it being Bleach fanfic which is rare, but i had to drop reading this fanfic because there is nothing Antihero in this fanfic. MC is too much of a ‘Good Boy’.

3yr
Tandoris
TandorisLv3

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

Saving Masaki is a Brainless logic move... (Masaki is Ichigo's mom that was killed by a hollow as Ichigo was younger) And I almost had hope for your novel

3yr
eQzy
eQzyLv1

Saving Ichigo's mother stupidly killed the desire to read. How is she better or worse than thousands and millions of other people? Because she's the mother of the anime's protagonist? Take such a risk, move to another city, follow the Ichigo family to save one person! I'm outraged! Written well, but here I go.

2yr
Prognastat
PrognastatAuthor

Shameless author self review. Just wanted to say this is my first attempt at a fanfic, hopefully you like it. If you have any tips or feedback feel free to let me know as I would love to improve my writing.

3yr
Bored_into_sub
Bored_into_subLv4

not gonna get dropped he said. he's just busy with work he said. updated 6 months ago.......................................................

2yr
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