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Ptitkactus
PtitkactusLv133yr
2022-03-01 18:13

Honestly a great story until the author decided to introduce The Beyonder.... Then it all went to ****, now all the story is about is a higher being toying with the mc :( Will problably come back to try this story again but I don't have high hope...

MARVEL: GAMER PATH

CORNBRINGER
4.7
297 Chs

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CORNBRINGER
CORNBRINGERAuthor

Is a very very very small arc. Sorry if it offended you.

3yr
CORNBRINGER
CORNBRINGERAuthor

The Beyonder Arc is 10 chaps long. what do people want, the MC not to have any problems with stronger beings until he’s as strong as them? Anyway. Wait a few chaps and see. The MC deals with the Beyonder in a interesting way.

3yr
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Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv4

is the beyonder the pre retcon one or not?

CORNBRINGER:The Beyonder Arc is 10 chaps long. what do people want, the MC not to have any problems with stronger beings until he’s as strong as them? Anyway. Wait a few chaps and see. The MC deals with the Beyonder in a interesting way.
3yr
Ptitkactus
PtitkactusLv13

He's the equal of the One Above All, at least that's what the author imply I think.

Kaisen1:is the beyonder the pre retcon one or not?
3yr
1
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

Hes not equal

Ptitkactus:He's the equal of the One Above All, at least that's what the author imply I think.
3yr
5
Alan_Jimcy
Alan_JimcyLv3

The beyonder arc ended quickly actually, it gave a slightly ominous look into Alex's real power

2yr
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

not pre retcon

Kaisen1:is the beyonder the pre retcon one or not?
2yr
Ghost_D_writer_
Ghost_D_writer_Lv12

yeah I dropped for the dame reason as not only beyonder but all higer being is litrally playing is mc and watching him like he is some clown ..I wonder even one of his action is not guided by any other powerful being...

2yr
2
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Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

You know me... When Cornbringer drops a new fic I give it five stars and then start reading it. It's practically a schedule by this point. ✌️

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Vahvel
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I hate people that just give 5-star reviews because "it's *insert author name here*!" without giving any kind of constructive criticism what-so-ever. The story has quite a few flaws, from some basic grammar mistakes (that can be glossed over, as those things are inevitable) to stupid and nonsensical actions taken by characters, be they from the main cast or not. It makes the story feel unnatural and inflexible. The characters' personalities are so-so, with some characters being actually adequately thought out, while the others seem to be there just because. The story between the MC and Emily feels forced and unnecessary. It is simply there for the "cute" factor and to limit the MC and his choices early on. I have read from other reviews that it does get better, but I simply am not capable of pushing myself through this story any longer. Props to the author for good update stability.

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Daijena
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Usually love Cornbringers stories, but on this one the mc feels....incomplete, he barely acts like a actual person and more of a comment than anything else. Lose thoughts inserted into a story and sold as a character. Which is disappointing. Rest is of usual quality, well made, just if the main character isn't that good it pulls the rest down as well.

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Dragon_5081
Dragon_5081Lv2

Hopefully this one doesn't get put into hiatus for 10 months again. But yeah I think I enjoyed the previous one kinda forgot since it's quite a bit of time ago, but yeah it's probably good.

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naraiz_ryhall
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It CORNBRINGER... What you expect from me.. hope you update the venom once again.... . . . .[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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lazyotaku68
lazyotaku68Lv1

I like the story, and when theres action it’s heavily entertaining. But theres a lot of cheesy pointless dialogue between Alex and Emily, we don’t need to know everything that happens between, especially when it adds little to no importance to the story. Like when Emily asks for Ice Cream, and then it shows us Alex’s reaction to Emily wanting Ice Cream, and then Emily’s reaction to Alex’s reaction to Emily wanting Ice Cream, you get where I’m going with this?

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Rouedkaross
RouedkarossLv5

Always interesting stories from Cornbringer so i try everytime but always end up disappointed by the MC. The MC is always super entitled and act like a troll in a game. By far the most disagreeable MCs i ever read about.

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Endless_CrowLv4

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ScionOfDegeneracy
ScionOfDegeneracyLv4

Garbage novel. Stat points only works when plot demands it. MCs IW hits 180. His monologue is too childish. No determination for anything. A stupid waste of time.

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