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lazyotaku68
lazyotaku68Lv13yr
2021-10-20 20:21

I like the story, and when theres action it’s heavily entertaining. But theres a lot of cheesy pointless dialogue between Alex and Emily, we don’t need to know everything that happens between, especially when it adds little to no importance to the story. Like when Emily asks for Ice Cream, and then it shows us Alex’s reaction to Emily wanting Ice Cream, and then Emily’s reaction to Alex’s reaction to Emily wanting Ice Cream, you get where I’m going with this?

MARVEL: GAMER PATH

CORNBRINGER
4.7
297 Chs

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Casual_Reader09
Casual_Reader09Lv3

true tho, it's like the author is trying too hard to make a "cute" scene. I really like wholesome stories but too much is just cringy.

2yr
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Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

You know me... When Cornbringer drops a new fic I give it five stars and then start reading it. It's practically a schedule by this point. ✌️

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Vahvel
VahvelLv3

I hate people that just give 5-star reviews because "it's *insert author name here*!" without giving any kind of constructive criticism what-so-ever. The story has quite a few flaws, from some basic grammar mistakes (that can be glossed over, as those things are inevitable) to stupid and nonsensical actions taken by characters, be they from the main cast or not. It makes the story feel unnatural and inflexible. The characters' personalities are so-so, with some characters being actually adequately thought out, while the others seem to be there just because. The story between the MC and Emily feels forced and unnecessary. It is simply there for the "cute" factor and to limit the MC and his choices early on. I have read from other reviews that it does get better, but I simply am not capable of pushing myself through this story any longer. Props to the author for good update stability.

2yr
Daijena
DaijenaLv14

Usually love Cornbringers stories, but on this one the mc feels....incomplete, he barely acts like a actual person and more of a comment than anything else. Lose thoughts inserted into a story and sold as a character. Which is disappointing. Rest is of usual quality, well made, just if the main character isn't that good it pulls the rest down as well.

3yr
Dragon_5081
Dragon_5081Lv2

Hopefully this one doesn't get put into hiatus for 10 months again. But yeah I think I enjoyed the previous one kinda forgot since it's quite a bit of time ago, but yeah it's probably good.

3yr
naraiz_ryhall
naraiz_ryhallLv3

It CORNBRINGER... What you expect from me.. hope you update the venom once again.... . . . .[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
Endless_Crow
Endless_CrowLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Rouedkaross
RouedkarossLv5

Always interesting stories from Cornbringer so i try everytime but always end up disappointed by the MC. The MC is always super entitled and act like a troll in a game. By far the most disagreeable MCs i ever read about.

2yr
ScionOfDegeneracy
ScionOfDegeneracyLv4

Garbage novel. Stat points only works when plot demands it. MCs IW hits 180. His monologue is too childish. No determination for anything. A stupid waste of time.

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