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2022-09-21 23:57

A shame given how much I liked the authors DC novel, but I truly cannot stand this one currently. Only on chapter 14 and the MC already acts as though he has moral high ground over almost anyone, wants to kill Charles acting as though he isn’t justified in trying to read the MC’a mind when he finds out the MC knows far more than they do about a very dangerous event that’s currently happening (Phoenix force Jean) and refuses to tell them, despite it being reasonable to assume said information could help stop her, or save her in Charles point of view (something anyone semi competent could see). For what reason? I can only assume another way for the author to bash on the X-men (Charles specifically) Not only is the MC just annoying at times but as I mentioned previously it seems like the author will try to find ways to make other characters act in the wrong (potentially even out of characteristic) so that the MC is in the right. Also how does he go from being wary of Jean / Charles to immediately telling her he’s down to fight? On the topic of him talking about how he’d kill Charles easily and he isn’t even worth it, straight up makes no sense. Unless the MC has some HUGE help from the system to stop Charles abilities then he stands zero chance

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