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Rubi_Stone
Rubi_StoneLv11yr
2023-05-04 23:16

Instead of spiling lots of useless words and making many fanfics, author could just concentrate on one of them and make something readable. Don't know what he's problem is. Lots of words on skills, their usages and of course not giving enough thought so those skills become not well balanced and if being OP is not such a problem, but not understanding them totally by himself makes mistakes (and then only one out of ten readers trully understand all the explanations of skills). And the reader would probably think the fighting actions etc gonna be with lots of details too but no, always a few words, to be precise most of fight scenes of this author is just time skips. Mc sees his enemy and fshuh, he lies dead with panting and seriously injured mc nearby

Beyond Earth:The horizon

Abadom
4.0
126 Chs

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Abadom
AbadomAuthor

This was my first Novel that I ended up stopping, and I find it funny how you went to one of my works to complain but now you're here huh? What is the point of leaving a hate review on a work that hasn't been updated in a while? Are you in need of attention or something? Your points don't even make sense, your review feels as if it was written by google translator, at least space things out so I can see each point, regardless, I'm done here

1yr
Abadom
AbadomAuthor

Also, I just checked your comment history, you're just a hater that goes to every novel just to complain and give 1 star reviews, go get a life to instead of bothering others

1yr
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5 star comments selling false hope. My motivation wasn't enough to carry me through so I dropped it getting close to the end of infinite stratos arc. And that is what I will review. Author if you gonna put a tag down please stick to it and don't bait anyone. A chapter named the world only god knows is very misleading and putting your character into infinite stratos instead of another mecha based franchise is questionable. The action and adventure aspect was quite lacking. Really hard to tell who's speaking unless you focus. Long walls of dialogue that leads nowhere. Personally I hardly cared about other characters. MC's personality never draws you in. Does the same boring stuff once reincarnated. The goddess, she's a back seat driver absolutely annoying. The author is kind of planning along and adjusting to the comments made.Good thing.Though there will be changes so keep that in mind. The writing is pretty decent than most other novels here. I gave extra points for the authors dedication. welp I'm out

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